I so want to read more! Please continue with this!

aw... poor mokuba... nice story, but very sad.

So Seto heard Mokuba... I think you really got into his head and Mokuba's in this chapter... Good job!

Very interesting story. I like how you're pointing out the divergence in the person that is Seto Kaiba. Mokuba probably does get frustrated with his brother's emotional state a lot.