Reviews for Digimon Continuity: Quest for the Digimon

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A Flying Tomato 2008-07-15 ch 19,	abusegreat story, I like how strikedramon gets some combat action, cant wait for the next update
Lunar Mika Black 2008-07-13 ch 19, anon.	abuseDoes Megidramon get released accidently again by takato or the other main dragon? o when will you explain how Takato and Ryo first met(obviously they are in deed the same person). Will the Orginal Digidestined show up to help yamaki and the Monster Makers?
Winter-Skye-Phoenix 2008-07-05 ch 19,	abuseAnother chapter! This chap was great. Strikedramon got his moment to shine, too bad the others were too busy to really see it. Poor Henry and Takato, getting crushed under Growlmon must hurt. Thanfully Rika's finally getting her act together, hopefully she'll get there in time. Update soon, this is getting even more interesting! Later, W.S. Phoenix
Matt Lans 2008-07-02 ch 18,	abuseWow...Rike sure had an ice queen burger and a side of bitchyness this morning, didn't she? Sure hope Ryo knocked some sense into her there.
Winter-Skye-Phoenix 2008-07-02 ch 18,	abuseHey, cool fic. I like it a lot. Poor Ryo, always feeling so betrayed. Hopefully the Tamers don't betray him like the others did. How come Cyberdramon doesn't remember ENIAC and the rest of what happened? Please update soon, this is really good. Is Ken gonna get that email from Ryo? Laterz, W.S. Phoenix
Matt Lans 2008-06-16 ch 16,	abuseMan, if Ryo thought he was injured before, wait til Rika finds out about this. SHe;ll kill him so fast he'll be sporting a halo and wondering why he's hearing harp music before he even realizes what happened. XD
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 7,	abuseOo, Rika was particularly catty here. Again, a break in their arguments could have been nice, but it still was a nice chapter. I really liked Ryo's hoping that meeting up their partners will make everyone be who they were before. It's a really interesting way for you to go. -N
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 6,	abuseThis one was a bit harder to follow...Takato's upset that he doesn't know about the portal, but he already discovered it--and Ryo noted in the last chapter that Takato was already at the hideout? I'm probably just being a space cadet. Which means that my only suggestion for this chapter would have been a lot more description...it was bouncing around pretty quick without much time to reflect on what people were thinking here. Oh well, moving on! - N
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 5,	abuseIt was cute with everyone falling all over the place trying to get the details out of the wrong people. The POV shifts are spaced out nicely, but I wasn't crazy about the author note in the brackets, or the 1)/2) towards the end, but that's just me. Ryo's answering the phone slowly while staring down Rika was cute. -N
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 4,	abuseYowch, I liked Janyu's little character assessment of everyone. I personally think this chapter was better than the last three...you had a good balance of description and script, the dialog sounded natural, and the DRAGOON system sounds pretty darn cool. Well done! -N
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 3,	abusePoor Ryo being stuck back in school. That was something I never really knew how to write in well-enough, so I ended up changing his age...sounds like you have a plan, though, so I look forward to finding it out! I really liked the dialog in this chapter, Jeri's in particular stood out to me. The only suggestion I have here would be to break apart some of the dialog with what the characters are thinking and feeling...Takato's little paragraph towards the beginning was great.
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 2,	abuseShame Rika went back to her colder-self so quickly. I really like how you wrote Ryo, it was pretty sweet. He's as persistent as ever, but still not expecting to get very far. I like that Takato was as excited as he was, everyone's nice and in-character. Not much to suggest on improvements, other than maybe easing up off the caps, but it was really only that one line. Great chapter! -N
Narissa 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseThis was really enjoyable, and was a great first chapter. As far as rewrites of the series' epilogue go, this was good...it was short, but still managed to establish the atmosphere, and felt like jumping right back into the series! Very well done. -N
erinsgirl 2008-06-04 ch 15,	abuseInteresting chapter. Who was the boy? Rika laughing seemed more understandable alright. Are you going to bring in the 02 crowd? Was the boy one of them? PS Thanks for mentioning me. You're the 1st to do that. YAY!
Pokejim 2008-06-03 ch 15,	abuseThis is an interesting story. So Taichi and Koushiro are producers, are they? So they are missing because someody(an evil Digimon, no doubt) kidnapped them. Good work. Continue updating! Signing off, Pokejim

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