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| Rosalyn Angel 2008-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseI absolutely adore how you've written our three ladies and how they interact. Azula being deliberately hurtful is great, and it's with her reasoning: a sharp reminder to Mai who is still with her, to make sure Mai knows and doesn't forget. And the mention of Ty Lee leaving, Mai watching for her at the crater's edge... And the scene where they were younger--too adorable, and IC, and and... YAY! I loved this. Many thanks for putting it up! |
| The great darer 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseJust about understood this, was pretty much okish, nothing grand to talk about. |
| Terrible 2008-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's all I got to comment on this, melodramtic and shallow presentaion of characters. |
| Jm2 2007-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse3 thumbs up! |
| Taena 2007-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm not too impressed with the story. |