Reviews for all the pretty little horses

Reviews For: all the pretty little horses

carol shue 2008-07-02 ch 1, anon.	abusevery well done! You captured "Zack's" voice and personality perfectly. Short, concise, and creepy. Please continue your writing; I will look for your byline on further stories. Oh, and kudos for continuity, pacing and grammar.
Phaith McCoy 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseHoly crow, that was good! Very well written, excluding a grammar mistake or two. Brava!!
G. R. Jensen 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abusePerfect; I would love to see more Bones fic from you :)
iknowyour 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! I can actually see something like that happening and Zack having trouble dealing with it. The little girl was creepy but I felt sorry for her.
notesofwimsey 2008-01-14 ch 1,	abuseI love this - I agree that of all of them, Zach would be the most logical one to have these kinds of dreams, and the most likely to do everything he could to avoid them. I think you did a great job of getting his voice and reactions to other people perfectly, especially to Cam, who seems to want to look after him. I look forward to reading other stories in this same genre.
coolchick207 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseWhat an utterly superb story. I love Zach, and I love that you captured him so well. Beautiful, poignant, heart wrenching in its simplicity. My congratulations to you.
Chameron4ever 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. I always thought Zach must have been covering up some type of emotion when he worked... especially after his coversation with Dr. Brennan in season 1 when they were working with the little kid's body. This was very powerful & well-written. nice job. :)
TemperTemper 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was really powerful and very well written. I loved getting a snapshot from Zach's POV and I also agree that there is not enough focus on the horror of everything that they witness, whether or not supernatural - this side of which I enjoyed too. Thanks for sharing.

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