very very great story!

Wow, you're brilliant at writing newspaper articles too, And I loved the ending, I wish i were Hermione right now.

Wow, that was one huge mystery once we got to it, I was so not expecting that. Hey, ya think I could get one of those operations and become a witch too? I love this chapter most out of the auror ones, it was so funny despite all the danger, you're so good at putting humour into serious situations, thats the sort of stuff I love reading, it helps me get through the dark parts of a story. I think the fluffy white bath robe was hilarious! Can't imagine Voldie in one though, can you? The best part was when Fred came in and tied him up as if he was merely scourgifying the dishes after baking his famous spinach quiche(I could just eat one of those right now).

YES! I'm so happy I could sing, but i won't 'cause it's the middle of the night and my neighbours wouldn't appreciate it.

COMMUNICATION PEOPLE! Why can't people just tell each other how they feel? In fact, Hermione thinks she's moving out and losing Fred as a friend anyway, so how much more harm can she do by confessing her feelings to him?

Ok, that transporting toilet paper sounds scarey, I'm now frightened to go to the loo. I have solved the problem of the creatures that prevent you pulling up your pants, wear a skirt and go commando.

Maybe i was wrong about George, if he was off with Alicia he couldn't be the culprit. Quite relieved because i love the Weasley twins.

Hmm, I suspect George has something to do with the muggle MP's deaths, there has to be a link between the toilet paper found at the scene and the new W product. And as for this common law thing, would it still count if you sneaked into the loft and lived their without the other persons knowledge? Because if thats true then people ought to check their homes thoroughly every few months.

I quite liked this story. You did a really good job on it. Fred and Hermione were in character, and their relationship was realistic. The story was engaging, and you did a very good job with the mystery part of it. (And I know how hard it is to write mystery, having tried it once...)
The only real criticism I have is that sometimes you use a word similar to the one you want, but with a different meaning, e.g. using "distinguish" instead of "extinguish". Unfortunately, I cannot now remember any specific examples from your story, or I'd point them out. Sorry.
Overall, the story was quite well done. :)

Nicely done! :)

Lols XD Aww! Awesomeness^^

really cool

OMG it was gardiner!! i only realised at the beginning of this chapter!
well done for covering it up!

:)

OMG! she died!!

o i love this story
and i'm really pleased she and Fred are together
they are actually really sweet, i didn't really think of them together :)

oo interesting!
will read the others now haha