I have always loved Marluixa x Naminé. I don't really know why.

I love everything except the 'Act I' part. Otherwise it's brilliant and you should continue.

Because no one appreciates creativity? That's a bit shitty. More than a bit. You have fifteen reviewers, I guess they were exiled to the "no one" catagory. They must be really appreciating that.

I didn't read your story because I don't like your attitude. It's certainly not a very efective way of getting more reviews, and even if it was, does it make you feel good about yourself?

You have a very short amount of story here and only one chapter. Should you continue of course more reviews are to come. You can't expect to have so many fans after only a couple paragraphs.

Hopefully when I browse this page in the future I will see a better summary for this probably wonderful story and I'll be tickled to read it and write a better review for you. Critique and alike, I am reviewing only the summary today, and hopefully you'll give this story a much better one, because I'm certain it deserves as much.

Yours very truly, your humble snotty advisor,

well this is the first kingdom hearts fanfic that I've read, and i find it really interesting as well as the interactions between these characters,
it would be great if you could start this up again!.

if not, thanks anyway for the brief
introduction of this intriguing story.

Yes. I luff it.

MORE! MORE! Gawd, I haven't found romance like this in awhile, thank gawd I found a promising piece!

I LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! FAVORITED!

O.O
You NEED to finish!
YOU ABSOLUTELY NEED TO FINISH THIS STORY!

You should continue. I like where this is going.

This is very good! you had me on the edge of my seat! Tell me...why stop here?

Oh, please continue this! Pretty please? This was creepy, but really good. ^^

Dude, you should so continue!! Seriously it's really good :) (and make it dirty! ;D)

Short, but well written. The way your wrote the interaction between Namine and Marluxia is interesting. There's something different about it. It's not entirely terror on her part. Namine's reluctant attraction adds to the uncomfortable relationship of the two.
Nicely done.

Ciao For Now Everyone!

Wow, I'm hooked. I sure hope that you do continue...please??

My my. An interesting pairing. Care to continue?

You should continue with this fanfic. I really like it, and its really well thought out.

Such a dangerous pairing, but sexy nonetheless. Continue please!