Love it.
Creepy...maybe but that just makes me love it even more.

Creepy, short, and beautifully done. Excellent job!

... O_o ech...sasori's deranged!! ech...

good job. no matter how hard i try, i cant rhyme my poems, so i have 2 give u points 4 rhyming. and like, fifteen more for the semi-creepiness of it. :)

WOW, very good! I'm impressed!!

very scary poem... but I like it. You have a talent for this :)
(I suck writing poems, hehe... and I cannot even write a good enough review, sorry)

Wow, that was really good. I'm surprised you actually thought of doing something like this! * ^_^

Ohgod, the last line...! xO~ Crap, it sent shivers down my spine. I told you: you do creepy!fic really well!!

Okay, I am totally stealing that thing you did to make the f-ed up poetry system work. BECAUSE THEY _DO_ HAVE STANZAS, DAMN IT!! D<

lol

Love it, as usual~

That was beautiful... *rolls in teh awesome creepy ansty bliss*