Cette histoire is not lame! *sorry, i speak frenglish at times >>
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This was cute ^-^

AW!!I didn't think it was lame! I liked it! Very cute!! I liked the way you kinda told us what Hayate was thinking at the end. Very, very cute!!
Tchuss,
Seccaberry

The ending wasn't great but still it's a good story. :D

your story wasn't in the least bit lame, it actually seemed like it would have been fantastic if you kept writing it. But it was good overall. so kawaii.. ^_^

Very cute.

Aw that wasn't lame! It was a cute simple innocent story ^ - ^ loved it!!

loved it!

is not lame!

its very cute *-*

i loved it!

kisus o/

that was so cute! great job! =)

THAT WAS A GOOD STORY! i loved it! great job! it was so sweet! and they stayed in character quite well!

OMG totally amazing! I just like love the whole thing! But...I'm not so crazy about the closing sentence :)

Please write more soon.

It's a pretty good story, so please let there be a sequal; mind you it does have a good ending to the first chapter.

so kawaii!!
i loved it!!
make more!!

~ hellTiShgUrL out ~

i DID enjoy your totally lame story haha just kidding i loved it!and no its not lame ^_^