AH!This is so awesome!Can there please be a sequel?!?!?!

Aww, that was really sweet. And sad. I liked it. Your writing style was excellent here; I could clearly picture everything. Good job on the story.

OMG! I got choked up! You are SUCH a great author! Please keep up the PERFECT work!~Your fan

I love this. I was hooked to every single word while reading. I can't think of any constructive criticism to give you, and the last lines do make sense. At least they did to me. xD

Anyway, great job.

Oh, and SasuSaku is adorable.

Oh, that was so poetic! I loved it :)

beautiful

-ukeire

Wow that's like, the most original thing I've ever read. Beautiful and haunting. Love it.

Wow.

This is one of the most...God... it was just amazing.

Keep up the good work...

Oohh la la. I liked it. Though it took a will for me to understand. I'm slow like that:P
Love it

Much Love