Nice. I like how you describe the little bits of the previous!Kyoko who got obeyed Sho and her mother, hoping to be loved in return. I especially love the ending line of this fic.

Oh - so cool!

Your style was original, I admire that :D

-I really liked how you said her rage burns, but does not warm her (super awesome line, left quite an impact)

I've read a number of your drabbles tonight, and so far, I've really enjoyed all of them, this one included.

I like this, it's rather deep you could easily make a very good story out of this. Will you? In either case I really liked it.^-^ GOD bless you.

Very good! XDD

This one is also very sad. It reminds me of the early Kyoko, just after Sho betrayed her and to an extent how she still is.

Great Fic, thank you for sharing this kind of POV about Kyoko.