 Splint 2008-01-05 . chapter 3Great chapter.
Not much going on but the dynamic between the characters is pretty interesting.
A race between Kid Flash and the Twins...in all honesty that's nothing too new for me since that was a plot already used in an issue of the Titans Go! comic book (I do recall that you said somewhere you don't read the comics)
Just so you know, the twins won in that race. Not because they were faster, but because KF spent too much time showboating and flirting with Raven and Argent (which ticked off Jinx)
Well, anyway, I still want to know how you would do a race between KF and M&M. hope you update soon. |
 StarWonder09 2008-01-03 . chapter 3Oh this should be interesting. A race between Kid Flash and Mas Y Menos.
I do hope you continue even though Christmas has passed. I hope to not have to wait a year for an update. Although, I'm one to talk. (I should update these next few days. Writers block is a terrible enemy!)
I enjoyed the chapter! |
 ThSamurai 2007-12-17 . chapter 3A race between Kid Flash and Mas Y Menos, hm. This could lend itself to something explosive. I hope its a long course, cause they might finish it before Starfire finishes saying "Go".
Now as for suggestions on games and contests, well, I do have a few;
First you could have some weithlifting between Cyborg and Thunder. Then to everyone's astonishment Starfire walks in and says she'd like to particapate.
Next you could pit Raven against Jinx in some kind of battle of wits. Azarathian v/s Socceress.
And then my last one (probably not all that great), is a classic game of "Chase me" between Robin and Starfire. You could make to where Robin has to catch her before a certain time or something.
Well those are my suggestions, use them in what ever way you choose. And I promise the next time you update I won't be this late. Laters!
ThSamurai ->- |
 ThSamurai 2007-12-17 . chapter 2First let me just apologize for making you wait this long for my review of THIS chapter, let alone the next one. I am sorry but three jobs, bad luck, and heavy snowfall kept me away from my computer. Am I forgiven...buddy?
Oh well, the review is nye!
One never gets tired of moments involving Raven and Beast Boy. There's just something about their chemistry that makes each one just as entertaining as the last. I nearly slammed my shut at his joke to Raven and Jinx because I just couldn't watch the insuing consequences. Luckily a bruise was all he got.
And yes I am fan enough to know when our fearless leader is talking to Thunder and Lightening. Course, maybe I'm so much of a fan that I'm still hopless. Na.
I'm gonna take a stab in the dark and say that our mystery bad guy here is...Slade! Yes? No? Probably no. It sure seemed like him, what with how he positivley sneered at the Brotherhood. Okay, next chapter!
ThSamurai ->- |
 Tsukikage1213 2007-12-15 . chapter 3No need to worry, I know quite a bit about Kid Flash and The Flash. They got their powers when they were struck by lightening, right?
This kinda reminds me of one of the Titansgo comics, ya know, the one where the Spanish twins and KF had a race. Only read the first few pages, so I didn't see who won. (Kinda hoping it's gonna be KF)
I'm really sorry for taking so long!
~*Tsuki*~ |
 Tsukikage1213 2007-12-15 . chapter 2Sorry for taking so long. I've kinda been away, and the place had limited internet access. I have having to pay for internet access.
Jinx rocks, hands down. I never used to like her at the start, but my opinion gradually changed. I liked her even more after Lightspeed.
Ya gotta love Beast Boy and his boyishness. I know I do, and Cyborg going all "baby" about his car was hillarious.
Once again, I'm very sorry. I hope this truckload of marshmellows is enough to say I'm sorry. They should be over in the next hour or so...
~*Tsuki*~ |
 StarWonder09 2007-12-08 . chapter 2Dun dun dun. So much for a wonderful Christmas party. The bads guys always have to get in the way. |
 StarWonder09 2007-12-08 . chapter 1Thanks for letting me know about your new story! I've been so busy that I've sadly had little time for fanfiction. (But I am working on the next chapter as we speak.)
I loved the chicken part. I had actually thought about him myself. Great chapter! |
 Splint 2007-12-08 . chapter 2I got around to checking out this fic of yours.
So far, I think it's pretty nice. Your characters do seem a bit OOC but that's forgivable enough though. The interaction between the cast is nice too.
I'm glad that there seems to be a little excitement coming from how the second chapter ended. I look forward to finding out who that creepy guy is though I already have my guesses.
Update soon! |
 Kioyuki Oniga 2007-12-07 . chapter 2Great fic, I like christmas fics, especially near christmas, it's like TV christmas specials only better, it'll be itneresting to see who shows up in the next chapter, so please update soon |
 anonymous 2007-12-07 . chapter 1 love the story. can't wait for more! |
 Shadow Crystal Mage 2007-12-07 . chapter 2Nice. Finally getting to the interesting parts, and so fast too! Lesser writers would have drawn it out with inane jokes.
Good to see Jinx and Raven getting along. Will the Justice League be showing up?
I don't suppose I can talk you into importing my version of Raven for a non-cannonical crossover...?
:)
Well, good look and advanced Merry Christmas! |
 Geojas378 2007-12-05 . chapter 1 Hi! I like your story... and if you EVER have a need for a Beast Boy, Jericho, or Red X fan girl, you know who to call! XD BB's old friends... Hm... I could think of five people. Terra, Jericho, Mas(or was it Menos?), Pantha, and Herald... Although Terra really has zero chance of showing up, though... Oh well...
Terra: Excuse me?
Face it, Terra. Everyone either hates or loves you...
Terra: *holds up finger and opens mouth slightly reminisenct of Kid Flash, but then turns angry* Come ON! I TURNED TO STONE, WHADDA YA PEOPLE WANT?! ME TO GO OUT CHRISTMAS CAROLING IN A ROBIN OUFIT AND A SANTA HAT?!
*one hour later*
Terra: *in Robin oufit and Santa hat, noticably very angry* Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way...
Hah... Merry Christmas... XD |
 ThSamurai 2007-12-05 . chapter 1Pretty good start, you said you wrote some time ago? If so why didn't you publish it any time earlier? That's the only thing that puzzles me at the moment. Also one thing about Starfire (yes I'm a bit nitpicky about it) is that she doen't use contractions. She doesn't say "can't" but insteads says "Can not". Its a combination of her royal upbringing and her lacking complete full knowlege of the English language.
Other than that one thing, I see no wrongs in this story. Jinx is understandably nervous about stepping into former enemy territory. I would be. Also I like how Robin just completely ignored the fan girls, like its something he deals with everyday. hope you udpate this soon. Laters!
ThSamurai ->- |
 Shadow Crystal Mage 2007-12-04 . chapter 1Nice. A bit bland, but nice. Looking forward to more. |