So. Damn. Cute! loved this! :)

I love this story, its so cute. actually i love all your stories, especially the ones with Scott and Jean, you make their relationship seem real. too many writers make all relationships just a whole lot of whispered 'i love you's but you make it realistic. so sad to hear you arent writing any more x men stories!

thank you for a great story!

Aww... Karl is just adorable. Just like his dad. :)

This is my favorite short story ever. It's just so cute! ) I love Karl! I enjoy all of your writting and I'm currently following Grail.

But returning back to this story. Before reading this, I was really a major fan of Scott or Jean. The way you write the both of them had me developed a liking for the two. I've lost count how many times I've re-read this bit, but now I'm finally reviewing it.

Keep up the good work!

AoN

Adorable. The two need a kid. Jean's a good mom, and even if I do occasionally have my doubts about Scott, he'd be a good dad. Besides, Karl is adorable, and everyone needs the gruff nurse. So, if I go through and review every story here, you'll know I've read it all. I'll get there eventually- it just might take me awhile.

AW! Too cute! Hehe, poor Kitty...

Very nice! I didn't notice any discrepencies with the adoption system, though, since I was three days old when I was adopted, I can't say that I know a whole lot about it.

This is a very cute story! As an adoptee, I find it even more touching, than perhaps someone who had grown up with their birth parents might. It was truly beautiful! Thank you for doing such a wonderful job of portraying the adoption program!

This is such a sweet story and its written so well. I could never imagine Scott as the father type, but you protray him as one perfectly. Well done

I love this story, Min. Very well-written, and entirely believable. Everybody expected Scott's kid to be Rachel or Nate, or somebody canon, but I like that this one is Karl, an adopted child. Very touching. I love it.

I thought this was very well written. It had me trapped the entire time:) Which could be a bad thing, considering i'm in school...Write more, Write more!

Oh, this was so incredibly sweet! A nice, different, sweet take on Scott. :)

aaawwwwww!*tear*

awwww, excellent and really sweet story! :o) I really love it!

Ok, you're my new favorite Scott writer. Not that I had one before now, but...yeah. Karl sounds so adorable! :) Rachel

great story