Reviews for Goodnight, Riff

TrisakAminawn 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseOh...ew...look, if Cain was enjoying it one minute, why was he crying the next? Consistency. Of course he's sorry, though...even Alexis isn't that cold. And he doesn't call himself Riff anymore, that's rather the point. It's Riffael. I don't think Cain invents poisons, he just collects them... Mm. Anyway, you made rather a hash of their characters. But you can use the language, at any rate.
Sir Gawain of Camelot 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abusePoetic. Not at all how it turns out, but how it looked likely to. ^^ Have you read volume eight yet? But the bible parallel of Riff to Abel doesn't work. Alexis is God, there's Cain, and Jezabel is Abel. The brother who didn't turn away from God.
Xx.Foaminians.of.the.Future... 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseoh **! AWESOME! and aww cain needs a hug =_(
Sanguinary Tears 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseWhat an amazing story! I really did like it, it's very emotional and sad.