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Reviews for: Unskilled Improvisation
2CrzY4U
1/7/12 . chapter 1
"Who likes rock music?"

"Toss him."

I started laughing really hard, threw my head back, and banged it on a wall... It hurt... But still... This was really funny.

-2CrzY4U
dbzfan8
9/20/10 . chapter 1
Liked it. Good Job.
Razell
7/24/10 . chapter 1
The L galaxy? Why, it's short for Lawliet, of course.

"I'm shocked and appalled you'd imply I'm a Spice Boy!" That was hilarious! I have a card of Jeice that actually refers to him as Spice in the text. I always thought Angira from Lord Slug's elite looked a lot like Spice myself.

The back and forth here was great, Jeice desperately spinning crazy excuses... He's a coward, but a lovable coward.
Starkiller
1/15/10 . chapter 1
I know I shouldn't be reviewing this story again, but I just had to shower you with more compliments (I'm afraid you'll just have to endure it). It's that damn good. I love your portrayal of Jeice, it's inspired so many of my stories and general love for him. He's such a daft coward, but despite that he remains a sympathetic character. Your sense of humour and dialogue is excellent, and of a style/wit rarely seen in DBZ fanfiction. I hope you find yourself back in the DBZ fandom again, we miss you over here!
MetroLuz
12/19/03 . chapter 1
This is nice...not great but nice...I like it keep it up.
Demon Queen
3/11/02 . chapter 1
omigod, omigod, omigod! that was about the funniest fic i've read since i don't know when. please, please, PLEASE write some more! DQ.
Starkiller
2/17/02 . chapter 1
Damn I love your writing! You're officially one of my all time favourite authors! ^_^ PLEASE continue this! Jeice is one of my fav characters (2nd to Piccolo ^^) & there just ain't enough fanfics out there about him! Plus I like where this story is going & I can't get enough of your writing so I beg you, CONTINUE!
The Greatest Boba Fett Fan
9/4/01 . chapter 1
it was funny! please continue!
King of the Poker Face
9/4/01 . chapter 1
hehehweh
Talec 18415
9/3/01 . chapter 1
Is good (and funny :D) so far! :) Continue!
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