Reviews for Above, Between, and Under

Reviews For: Above, Between, and Under

edxwin is cannon!!! 2008-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abusewibbles happily I love hurt!ed so much... maybe one from his pov of the shooting? eh? eh? nudges
Anorak Myth 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseNormally I'd be turned off by this pairing, since I believe in Parental!RizaxAl and also in RoyxRiza, but you made this work. Really. It's amazing. I felt sorry for Ed because Al was so mad at him and I felt sorry for Al because I felt sorry for his brother. Al really doesn't get enough attention and this actually made me feel guilty for reading Ed-centrics all the time. In short, wonderful story. I don't know how you did it. favs
Anti-Logic 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseWow, you never cease to amaze me - yet another pairing that I would have never thought would work in my life, and you manage to actually work it, and do it well. "Mustang walks confidently onto the stage, like he’s never been threatened a day in his life, like he’s walking on sunshine and damn well wants the rest of the world to walk with him." I loved this bit to no end. xD
Dixie Cup of Doom 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseI haven't read this (yet, it's damned hard to break back into something I haven't touched in years), but I just wanted to exclaim my joy for you and that the fact that we haven't spoken in years is very very sad. ): I misses you sometimes, Melly. HAPPY LIFE AND I WILL REVIEW PROPERLY ONCE I REMEMBER HOW EVERYTHING WENT, Fitchy.
Legendary Chimera 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseWonderful! I've missed your stories. The length of this one really makes up for it. It took me two days to read! :D I like that you have all with all this torturous, contradicting, uncharacteristic thoughts. But then he acts his kind and gentle self, save for being spaced out now and then. Awesome, please update soon! Peace out!
Sera and Tails 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuse"The saddest thing – Al’s next natural thought is to be jealous, that this man wanted to kill his brother over him. Ha." dies Damn. I never imagined a Al&Riza pairing and I almost didn't read the fic because I thought it sounded so incredibly absurd. Don't I look the fool, 'cause in reading this, it was just...well, nothing short of spectacular. Al just rings so True, it makes my heart swell, and adding that hurt!Ed in there didn't hurt your case either. I've been away from the fandom from some time, but in reading this makes me feel like I've been missing out. Loved every.single.line, CK. Thanks for bringing the 'verse back to me :) (Don't know why you're not happy with this piece... Look again! It's a masterpiece, dipped in caramel) Cheers, Sera
RaceUlfson@pacbell.net 2007-12-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this fic. The current tense gives it an edginess that goes well with Al's mental state. I adore his all to human mixed emotions and the elegant way you showed Al's torment. Ed, Mustang, and Armstrong were perfect as well. Loved Hawkeye and the caramel. The book avalanche was wonderful.
TangerineVampire 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseYay! You posted it. (: As I said before, even though this is an Al-centric fic (when you and I both prefer Ed-centric), I think you did a fabulous job capturing Alphonse's confusing and twisted emotions. It's a great exploration of the darker thoughts in this usually light-hearted character's mind. Great job!
JChrys 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseLove. It. :) It's wonderful to see the somewhat jealous side of Al - come on, we all know it would be in there somewhere - and the guilty side that we KNOW is there. Have to point out one line here:'...because he’d long ago lost track of which one was the ground; his feet were on it, but having no feeling or awareness of his body for the longest time sometimes afforded a splendid sense of vertigo'- fantastic. I had to explain to someone else in the room why I was commenting to my computer (again). It's rare to see any decent explanation of what Al's life would be like when the glorious day comes when he gets his body back. I really, really like yours. Please (PLEASE) keep up the good work. Have missed you in here. :)
Tia Ordona 23 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abuseThis was excellently written! Very well done. The funny thing is, I don't really like Al/Riza, but I enjoyed it anyway. And God knows I really really really love hurt!Ed and papa!Roy. "Alphonse dreams in newsprint, in solid little dots of black and white. His name never once appeared in the article that glorified Ed, but he was mentioned. Right under a mug of the detained assassin." "The saddest thing – Al’s next natural thought is to be jealous, that this man wanted to kill his brother over him. Ha." I thought these conveyed Al's feelings excellently. For some reason the show always keeps him in the dark, even though when it comes to the end, it's all about him. Besides, he's got a cute baby face. XD "Greed just shrugs in the back of mind when he pulls her back and kisses her, and Gluttony sadly acknowledges that she doesn’t taste like caramel at all." I loved how you portrayed this, too. It was excellent. Funny how they mention the seven sins int the show but they never apply it to characters... Well, except for the actual homunculi... Wow, this is turning out to be one, heckuva review, no? :D Well, I really did enjoy this. Thanks so much for writing!

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