Joey calls seto 'drago' during sex then names one of his sons that...
Weird..
Anyway
That's the only thing bad I have to say about this fic

I love the way you discribed everything. It was all very discriptive. And I never wanted to stop reading. I was sad when it ended. If the whispers live for a long time what happens when joey and the others get old and die? Did seth put a spell on them that makes them age like them? I hope. I love the way you made each couple different. I also love how the whispers are so pretective.
And how tristen is the 'girl.' A lot of fics make duke the 'girl.'
I love seto and joey!
You're an amzing writer.

Very interesting.

I luved this story! You did an amazing job!

I like this story that you wrote here. I hope you can write more storys like this.

OMFHG !! *squeals
This is amazing ! Make a sequeal ! *jumps up and down
LOVE EVERY MINUTE I RED THIS !
*two thumbs up

Wow! This was such a good story! I loved every minute reading it! I'm gonna miss reading it!

hurray! i finally got the chance to finish it! one of my first favorite supernatural stories based off seto/jou among other pairings! DO MORE!

so far so good. I'll read the rest later since i'm quite busy at the moment with school work. (grumbles). Anywho, good job!

NOO it cant be over its not fair please for the love of all things good sequel?? i spent an entire day reading this because it was so good (though now i cant feel my legs) so please will you write a sequel?
blue-fox

I have a dark magician card along with many others I have been trying to get rid of any way nice story.

this s a really good story lol! i love these types of stories and am always on the look-out for them, once again, amazing story lol ^-^

Aw, It was a sweet storyline. Are you open to critique? If not, skip this next part.

I suggest that you work on your grammar and imagery--I couldn't ever figure out what I was looking at until the second or third time reading it, and you did have a few grammatical things that bothered me--I would normally quit reading a story like that. Oh, and I believe you flipflopped between future and past tense a few times.

End of Critiques!

But really, I enjoyed the story. Stayed up so late reading it that I can't even see strait, but still enjoyed it. I'm glad to know that you have that much creativity. The plot was interesting, but again, a little hard to catch the first time around.

I would be estatic if you tried to rewrite/edit/revise this, but I'm quite happy with it just the way it is. I truely think that it doesn't matter at all how a story is written or what the words look like, as long as the words speak to you.

I'm happy you wrote this, on a scale of 1-10 I give it a 9 and a 1/2. You did good! I'm excited to have read it, glad to have the memory of it, and hopeful that you'll continue writing.

Thanks for your story, and sorry if there was too much critique in here. I really do like the story.

Oh, but if you do rewrite it or something in the future... Maybe focus on one couple mainly. No... wait... well... No, I like it with all of them. ^^;

Sorry.

>=D

Have a great day.

You have no idea how happy this story made me. Seto/Jou is one of my all-time-top-five favorite pairings. I have to say, the plotline was very thought out, or so it seemed. My only critque is that Jou's accent was rather distracting and hard to understand. But otherwise great! 10/10. ^_^

Winchester? Love!

Curses, I have class in four and a half hours because I stayed up until 3:30 in the morning reading this, refusing to close my laptop until I had the conclusion of the story.

That was highly, highly enjoyable, every bit of it. I may not have an account online but this is certainly bookmarked on my computer so that I can come back and read it through again when it's not the wee hours of the morning.

Excellent work! Everything was good - from the Whisperers and histories to characterisations to the pregnancies in general. Much love! I'll look up more of your work later. Keep writing!