That was interesting. I loved the little jokes at the end. especially since my last psych class has me serious debating about switching majors. anywho, this was really good. lots of emotion, lots of tension, and an amazing ending. Absolutely loved the ending. It is a nice wrap-up for a one-shot or a great introduction if its a continued story. :D

Wow I wish you had created a story about this.

really great beginning. very sad, but i am eager for the rest!

More from Venus Smurf! More from Venus Smurf! Yay! (Does a little dance) I know you probably thought I'd yell at you again for starting yet another new story, but I'm too happy that you posted this. I loved the choice, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do with the sequel. I'm kind of surprised that it's not a one shot since I know that's what you were planning, but I'm glad it isn't. Yay!

Hm, I didn't actually expect this to be a Chapter sort of story? I thought they were just gonna be one-shots, not that I mind, of course. I actually quite liked them, it's a good thing - and this one has a certain, um, twist to it...
Can't wait for the next one!!

This story is off to a really good start. I really like that you are working Ace into the story who seems to be fully aware of who Mina and Mal are - Nice! Update soon (and your other stories as well...)

I did bad :P I read this first on DGRFA, then went back here to read the original (wanna post The Choice so people don't do a Goddess Usagi and read them backwards? :P)
The choice was... intriguing. I'm glad you wrote this one, because I feel like there were a few things that needed expanding upon from the original. So I can't wait to see where you'll go with this.. though I'm a lettle worried about Ace. :P Good luck with chapter 2!
xx Usa