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| Egg 2008-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was absolutely fantastic. I love Leo + Mikey interaction; oldest and youngest ftw! It made me giggle and squirm~ Favorite line(s): "Bruce Wayne had about eighteen different alter egos. It was beautiful." |
| Netbug009 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseI used to watch this show a long time ago, but i'm quite rusty. My friend begged me to read one of her TMNT fics, and this I what I got after demanding it to be short. XD But between what I remember, what I gather from your fic, and m basic understanding of writing, I'd say this is a pretty darn good little story. It made me chuckle. I liked the dialog especially. |
| Tatsumaki-sama 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI just love Mikey and Leo moments. They don't get a lot of time together and seem to have such contrasting personalities but after reading this, you can see how close they actually are. Leo's so cute, shy at first with Mikey, then starts playing with his baby brother. Gotta love them. ^^ |
| Lil Ole Me 97 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseOh, so cute! Haha, "coolest big brother ever." Just too cute! I gotta admit, I have to agree with you... Mike and Leo DON'T get nealy enough fun, simple interaction! It always seems to be Mikey/Raph or even Mikey/Don.. but I've seen very few Mikey/Leo! Thanks for writing it! :) |
| BubblyShell22 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was cute! Nice job. You are a good writer. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| Pirates Sparrow and Turner 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWe enjoyed this cute, sweet, little fic and the rare opportunity to see the softer side of Leo! Good work! :-) |
| Sera and Tails 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseSuper awesome. :) -Sera |
| caylender 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was so awesome! I love the Mikey and Leo interaction. There really aren't enough of those. Great job! |
| Mrpointyhorns 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseOh this is really cute! I'm so glad I read through my normal fandoms! |
| Toki1 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseAW! that was super cute and to the point. im curious to know how u woudl write longer stories bout the brothers like this. |
| Kitty 2007-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw. I love u. |
| DbKiT 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Its nice to remember that Leo isn't all about being serious and strategy. He has a relaxed fun side too! |
| Joce 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abusehehehe, that was undeniably cute X3 loved it! cute and fluffy -Joce |
| The Great WTF 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuse*squee* *clicks fave button* |
| Hoodoo 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, the tragic Zombie Spiderman. "He resists the crawling urge,” Mikey recited automatically, “and continues to work on finding a cure.” “He’s a scientist, too?” “Leo,” Mikey said patiently, leaning forward from his place seated on his bedroom floor, “Donny’s a hero and a scientist, too. It’s not exactly unheard of, y’know.”" I, too, have had this conversation. You rock! |