I rememeber when you updated a year ago and I was so exicted and happy and going OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG over and over in my head. And now I come back to the story and it's already december, the end of 2009. Reading the Authors notes was the funniest thing ever. "I could give you hundreds of excuses of why this update is so very late" Especially compared to now.

Alright, now all my saddness and mourning over how you haven't updated this in so long is over, this story is one of the best stories I've read in a long time(again) and really shows how you're one of the best Kingdom Hearts Authors on this site (insert smile). I love how Sora isn't written as an idoit like most people do (because Sora is universally considered stupid), but you some how managed to give him a little bit of depth without turning him in to an gothic evil completly out of character...thing.

I just really love this story and hope that you might some day come back to it onje day. :)

You're SO close to the end, won't you finish it? I know it's been almost a year but please? Just finish it, you can probably end it in one to two more chapters.
Wildfire

Well, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, to say the least. And a cliff-hanger too. MEANIE! xD
Anyhow, well-written, ect, ect. I really can't find a single flaw with this. It's beautiful and flows from chapter to chapter just brilliantly.
Please keep writing? 8D?
- Ritzs

OMG! I seriously wasn't aware of how much i hate the pairing of Riku and Roxas, I slapped myself numerous times while reading this. I only kept reading to see if he'd stop his tryst with Roxas.

Dude, this is seriously and totally awesome! Although I've read a few fics about death (and an actual novel, "The Book Thief") this is one of the first deathly-involved kingdom hearts fanfics that I've read about it. Like most other stories, they're uber depressing since it involves all the aspects of death, like remorse, longing, and a crapload of regrets. However, it makes me really happy to know that Sora's not being an ** (it's outta character, but it works beautifully with the story) and making up with everyone. It's actually rather heartwarming.

I really hope that this will have a great ending - like, I'm expecting Sora to die again, yet I'm also wondering that maybe Axel will spare him or something. Honestly, I can't tell at this point and that's probably what compels me to read your fic so intensely lol. The stories about growing up are bitter, but seeing Sora mature and become a better person is simply inspirational! =] Your storyline is very creative and interesting, as are your characters. I'm assuming this fic will be over soon and all your adoring fans (ahem, moi included x3) will be supporting you until the end. I hope and pray to see more from you soon, so best of luck to you!

I love this story and want to know what happens. Please update! This is one of the most emotionally movie stories I've ever read. And I'm not exaggerating.

Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous! How have I never... I mean, totally divine, well, everything in this! ...man I feel like such a dork. -_-u Probably am, though.

This is so deliciously depressing and (in my opinion at least) at times comical and very funny, in a sarcastic manner. It's those Sora's own comments that are between the spoken words. The usually bitter ones. Great styling there.
Everything's so unique and unexpected.. Heh, god... Axel... Gah. Oh sorry, Death. I feel like I'm forgetting something. Well... *shrug* I dunno.

Really looking forward to the continuation of this, and your other KH fics, too, actually. But no rush, I'm not justified to hurry others. C:
Don't forget to sleep!

Wow! I just finished reading the four chapters you currently have up. This story is absolutely amazing and heart wrenching, and it seriously sent chills down my spine. I love how you put everything from Sora's point of view, and the way you write...Dear God the emotions are right there. I almost started crying, I felt so bad for Sora. You really feel for the other characters too though, and...wow. I really hope you update soon.

Oh my god. I usually hate AU stuff, especially of the cheating ex variety, but HOLY CRAP! This is AMAZING! God, Why- do you force us puny mortals to wait so. *crais*
no seriously, this is an amazingly well thought out, heart-wrenching fic. I REALLY hope you chose to continue it.

I just won't to let you know I love this story it's just so sad and haunting(in a good way). I feel like I can feel his emotions through your writing. I do hope you continue because this is a great story.

-Bell

Oh... oh, WOW. I can't even begin to describe how many shades of awesome this fic is. *swoons*
To be honest, I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading this, but then when I started I couldn't /stop/ and I nearly started crying for Sora because I'm a SAP like that.
Seriously, on the last chapter I was dreading scrolling down because when I finished it would mean I couldn't read any more and would be left with a cliffhanger until you update again.
On that note, PLEASE update soon! I know you're probably hella busy with life 'n all, but...
-shakes head-
All I can say is... wow. Just... wow.
I hope you get the next chapter up soon :]

Gah! I can't believe you stopped it there!

Also, I'm a complete fail, because this chapter has been up for months, and I hadn't gotten around to reading it yet. (Actually, I didn't recognize the name of the fic, so it got buried in my inbox ...) Just this one chapter reminded me how much I love this fic, though. There's just something about the whole atmosphere that really grabs me. I'm so glad that you are continuing this fic, even if it's going slow! Better late than never, as they say. *pokes Sora meaningfully*

I'd say it was worth the wait, even though this review is EXTREMELY late. Sorry. ^-^;;

I hope you can update soon! This story is WAY too good to just leave hanging. Trust me on that. Though I do love how you make the chapters long. :D

It's a cliffy! I'm wondering what will happen?

Praise to you and your story!

Luffles
Judiro

oh god...it's so sad.
really.
i think it's the saddest story i've ever read about the two. and i ** like it! not that i'm really into sad and heart-wrenching things, but it's awfully good.
i totally understand sora's struggle and i wouldn't know what to do either.

so finally you're updating again! ^^
i wonder when the next chapter will be up. i hope it wouldn't take this long, because i sure as hell am dying for you to continue yor wonderful work.

i wonder, if leon will tell the others, when sora dies. not that i want him to die.

the story gives you a sort of sad aura, because you already know that he will die in the end. no matter what (or won't he?)

please write as fast as you can and continue! it'll be too wasteful to not doing it.

greetings, azure sea

hmm, I'm not quite sure what to say about this new chapter, other than it's amazing! Honestly it is well done. I can't wait to read more. ^_^