hehe, small, but has potential ^_^

looking forward to reading more of this ^_^

Hy there, Well, so far i like it, it's got humour and some mystery. Can't wait 4 the next chapter! Oh..and.. I hope the guys will show up soon enough. Anyway.. cand u make an M chapter 2?! Please!
:)) :P !! Keep it up! Bye!