 Soldier78 2009-06-08 . chapter 1 Wow! That's all i can say! Its amazing! Keep it up! |
 Goldenstargirl 2009-01-10 . chapter 1I think this is beautifully written for a first fanfic, or any story for that matter. It almost made me cry at some parts, but it made me smile towards the end. The fluffiness of the ending made up for the angst at the beginning, especially since they kissed twice. Both Aang and Katara were in character, and the entire story was nicely detailed. The emotion that you showed in the fic was extremely touching, and really brought out the story. I would love to see another Kataang fanfic written by you, because I can tell that you're truly gifted at writing stories. Keep up the magnificent work! |
 Elyon's Servant 2008-06-09 . chapter 1Aww! Love it! Ir's just so sweet! Great job! |
 ILoveKenIchijouji 2008-02-22 . chapter 1three words: I. Loved. This. this was a wonderful story and i put it on my favorites. i think you have a talent for mixing angst and love into a story to make it wonderful. |
 Summer Sweetheart 2007-12-21 . chapter 1I really liked that. Not too OOC unless there was something I missed. I dunno... Anyway, great! |
 Mags-rulez-teh-world 2007-12-17 . chapter 1wwo this was one of the best avatar fics that ive read. it was totally awsome! |
 feathersnow 2007-12-06 . chapter 1wow! Thanks a lot! Now this means Kataang rulez! Boo to Zutaras! They'll never exist! ^^ Thanks for the fluff! |
 TheElite711 2007-12-06 . chapter 1I say that is incredible for a first fanfic :-). I was getting all wrapped up by this when i first started reading, this was a good story. |
 ficaddicted 2007-12-06 . chapter 1So fluffy!! Makes me feel warm inside! |
 Tokkalover 2007-12-06 . chapter 1wow, this must have taken a lot of hard work... It's amazing! |
 hsmzanessafreak25 2007-12-06 . chapter 1omg that was possibly the best story i have ever read and i read a ton of stories. Please right more kataang soon! |
 Winnywriter 2007-12-06 . chapter 1O_O That's your FIRST FANFIC?
That was absolutely amazing! One of the best I've read in months! It gave me chills! I really mean that!
It was...it was...just...wow...that's all I have to say.
LOVE IT! ^.^ |
 oranfly 2007-12-06 . chapter 1Oh with the tears!! I'm at work and I'm not supposed to be crying!! This was truley one of the greater pieces of writing on this site. You are clearly a master of grammar and using it to weave a spell on it's readers. Um, constructive critisism... you spelled the word "scared" as "scarred". I seriously had to dig for that one though. I hope to read more fics by you in the future. |
 maddmman 2007-12-05 . chapter 1You're a very articulate author. It's very refreshing to see a well-written piece of work show up every now and then, not that I have anything against anybody else's work. |
 DuHSPaZZiNGFeL 2007-12-05 . chapter 1That was absolutely, and truthfully, beautiful It made me cry, it made me think, it made me wonder...those are the attributes of a wonderfully written story. And you have hit all of them. I would like to say..WELCOME to the fanfic world. I welcome you with eagar eyes. I seriously can't wait for more of your work! |