you never cease to amaze me.

I could've sworn I'd reviewed to this! I know I've read it before...Hmm...

Well, my horrible memory aside, I like this. ^^ The flow is nice and after Jill's views on the laguz change, I can see this happening. Yep. This is a nice little piece. I enjoyed it.

I actually haven't played FE10 yet, but lucky for me, there weren't really any spoilers in this >_>. I couldn't help myself, anyway. I'm on a HaarJill rampage and I just had to read this. Anyway, this is very nicely written. I especially liked your descriptions. Unfortunately, I can't really say much about the content, since I haven't played the game yet. Still, I enjoyed it, but it was a little short, so that made me kind of sad. =P

Very short but very nice. Good job and great descriptions. You may have used the word 'far' too many times but I am guessing that was the writing style of the story.

Hooray Haar/Jill, we need more of that. Possibly without angst, but I like everything to have less angst in it. "Why cry when you can laugh?" is my overly-simplistic motto on life, so don't mind me.

Boo for Feral Ones. You always feel so guilty for having to kill them in the game, don't you? Well, up until a dragon totters up to you and it's like HO SHIT WALKING TANK WITH FIRE.

But maybe that's just my reaction.~ Anyways, good drabble, it's always nice to see you continuing your little collection of them!

Awesome drabble on an awesome pairing.

I only found one noticeable blip in the writing, and even then it's not technically wrong:
"...their wyverns behind them--the beasts, too, looked outward as Reyson's song ended, as if they, too, understood."

Having the "too" after beasts makes the segment sound redundant.

Amazing as always. Can't wait for another drabble; or whatever comes next.

I really loved this story! It was very sweet, and I liked the whole idea about Jill being upset over killing laguz, it shows how far she's come.

The Haar might have been a little OOC (perhaps he was a little too sweet), but it made for a great story so I didn't mind too much.

Great job, hope to see more from you!

Aww! Haar's so sweet to Jill...

Wow, though. Just wow. I personally have yet to face a Feral One, but when I do, I'll be sure to remember this drabble! Well done!

Touching, and cute... Good job.