Oh damn, I'm so sorry I mixed up my review windows open xDD
I meant to say my previous one to someone else without realising the mistake. I MEANT to say that this is such a terrible place to end >< You left us with such a cliffhanger we will be squirming for a long time until your sequel comes up. Interesting fic nevertheless.

Ahahaha what the HELL?! xD

This was really interesting and it made me laugh out loud at some points (in the beginning). Later on, was kinda depressing, Harry getting tortured and all. I guess I just don't have the stomach for torture.
Though you do have a lot of typos, and some words seem to be missing from sentences, so it can be kinda confusing to understand.

Can't wait to read the sequel. :)

This story is marked as complete but feels very unfinished to me. There are many loose ends regarding future Harry and his warnings, and nothing of the repercussions from Harry's kidnapping. You have Voldemort gaining the prophesy, but nothing past that. Ah well.

It was interesting to see how much is changed just from a visit from future Harry, and I definitely could not have predicted that happening. I liked how Harry got to know Snape and Draco slightly better and became slightly more tolerant and understanding of them. Especially liked how he became slightly closer to Remus and Sirius. Good story.

i like it ^^ can't wait to read the rest

I love this story. I started reading it at P&S and then somehow lost track of it. I was thrilled to find it again and see so many new chapters. I love your writing style.

Wait...if they can't be seperated, then wouldn't Malfoy figure out the truth about the "Remedial Potions", which would be a huge security risk if it got out Snape was teaching Occlumency?

i love it!
update soon.

amazing story! can't wait for the sequel :)

Well written, with a storyline that drew me in and kept me wanting to read more. Thanks for sharing your story, I enjoyed it a lot.

This was intense, amazing, and purely fantastic to read. Thank you very much for taking time to write and post this. I look foward to seeing a sequel.
"Normal is only a setting on a washing machine." -Raven

Is this gonna be slash?

I'm likin' the story so far. Harry seems much more… playful than in the books but that be because I've read a lot of dark/ angst Harry stories and its been like a year or two since I've read the books. I like the story and the plot is very orginal.

I definitely enjoyed this story - your plot is very original and your writing style reads just like canon (except for a few spelling/grammar errors that can be fixed with careful editing). It captures the darkness and danger of OotP, especially the scenes with Voldemort - he was really menacing and frightening here, and the scenes were a suitably horrifying follow-up to the graveyard scene in GoF. I also liked the relationship between Draco and Harry - I think that you kept them both in-character and I'm glad that they weren't friends right away. Good job!