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| tearbos 2007-12-20 ch 15,  | abuseYeah! Perfect! I'm so glad you didn't kill him. Gotta love Reidisms! |
| tearbos 2007-12-20 ch 14, | abuseWow. Yes. Love it. I did read the first version, just didn't get to review before now. This is definitely better, and not just because Spence isn't dead at the end. It fits with the story so well. I hope they're ok. Off to the next chapter. |
| Montydog13 2007-12-19 ch 15, | abuseWell done. And my gorgeous man is able to see again and all seems right in the world. I'd be very happy if you left it there, or do you feel you still have to resolve things? |
| scc1fan 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abuseYAY! I had a feeling that's where you were going when you had Hotch get knocked out, but you did it perfectly. I can tell there's not much left, but I'm looking forward to it! Lovin' it, Kas |
| 101spacemonkey 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abusefeels like an ending at te same time it doesnt, i think reid seems to have recoveered from his bit of a depression a bit too fast... i think he should still have major feelings of self doubt... love it anyway, so let me know if you are going to keep going, cause im not sure if this is the end... dont think it is and yet that nagging little voice... |
| numb3rslover 2007-12-18 ch 5, | abuseheres an idea for ur next one: JJ is really sick, Morgan is really sick, Reid is really sick? Why are they sick? And What is prentiss rossi(or gideon) hotch going to do? Hostpital? |
| SpencerReid 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abuseUPDATE! Reid will be in so much pain later,I hope you update soon, happy writing. XD |
| criminally charmed 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abuseoh< much better |
| foxyladyhubbards 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abuseThank you for changing chapter 14. I liked the new and improved chapter 14. But I really loved this chapter. Reid's right, everything happens for a reason. Now is the time for Hotch and Reid to heal. |
| tellygirl 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abuseThank you for this story,I have a silly grin on my face now! I like angst but I think it's the aspect of someone being in trouble and the team would do ANYTHING to help that appeals to me so when a character death occurs I feel they have failed,so thanks for not killing Reid! :o) |
| tellygirl 2007-12-18 ch 14, | abuseI never read the original version of this chapter but by reading the earlier reviews it sounds as though Reid killed himself,I could be wrong of course but if I'm not then I'm so pleased you decided to change it. His feelings are understandable but he has to realise that not only wasn't it his fault but his friends will help him get through it,especially Hotch,who has huge problems of his own...that sort of love should be recognized and appreciated. |
| Princess Shlay 2007-12-17 ch 15, | abuseYAY! Thay're happy again! And Hotch can see! Such a sweet chapter, I love it! |
| numb3rslover 2007-12-17 ch 15, | abusegood job next chapter or is it finished? Mystery oh:) ! R_C-Eppes |
| medicgirl 2007-12-17 ch 15, | abuseOh wow! Such a beautiful ending! Hotch can see again, and Reid's guilt was gone, and everything happens for a reason. Great job, and I'm so happy I could be of help. This is one of my favorite stories of all times. |
| rowlinglover222 2007-12-17 ch 15, | abuseThis was a great ending. I sort of liked the old chapter 14 though, but that one fits better with the story. Thanks for updating hope to read another story from you soon. |