Hilarious story which has had me in stiches at times.

You're a fantastic writer. keep it up :)

Update please

Dum dum dum! I'll probably need to watch that so I can find out how they'll get out of Hueco Muendo. Update soon! And I'm thinking that Nel is going to talk to Grimmjow next.

Dude that was cool you having Hanatarou mouth off to Soifon like that. I had chills. Oh if he had done that in the anime she'd peel him like an onion. or in the manga. Anyway with her temper I would not mess with her without regretting it immediately.

Good job with the fight scene with Hana and Soifon. The rescue, escape, and aftermath of the Hueco Mundo escapade should be interesting.

lol Yammy

good chapter.methinks next chapter will show hana doing an ichigo and getting a powerful bankai.keep it up

btw
i read 'Hollow heart 1', and 'Three days' again and i just have to ask, Wtf happened with Yamamoto!? he is becoming a heartless basted all of a sudden, basically asking Soifon to kill Hanatarou. But before he was only doing it for his own good (or however much good it could really do...putting him through that) and the good of the soul society. I suspect he feels a bit humiliated that a 7th seat could beat all of his captains, but still!! he should value little Hana even more now! not want to kill him off.

Ok...i just needed to vent...but i hope that Yamamoto doesn't try and arrange for Hana's death anymore. I just feel bad for him...the leader of the soul society is out to get him 0_0

Sweet chapter! Glad you updated! Are you going to include the female Espada/Arrancar with Hana or just leave them out altogether?

This chapter was wonderful!

Your use of imagery and detail is excellent, i can really imagine what is going on without any confusion.
The dialogue between Hanatarou and Soifon is is defiantly believable, and Hanatarous outburst, in my opinion, was long overdue XD just goes to show how patient and goodhearted he is.
I'm glad that you don't poetry Hanatarou as a weakling, like most do in their stories, but rather show him getting stronger. I feel that Soifon has a little more respect for him...a little.
Its getting too suspenseful to bear, i cant wait for the next chapter.
I'm sure you will come up with some amazing way for Hanatarou to save the day.

I love that despite the dark tone of the story, you still mange to slip some comedy in there

Hanatarou gave out a gasp. “You’re father’s a SLUG?”

“HE WAS SPEAKING FIGURATIVELY!”

XD i had to take a breather from laughing, after reading that.

Great job yet again,Tite Kubo would be proud ^_^

Update Please

I love your story. Its kicks the ** out of S even if I don't know what it means or what the heck its goal is probably not good huh? Anyway I hope Soi fon will lighten up even if its just when the two are alone. I know or at least I hope Hanatarou will rise above all and be a don't know god or something like only he can by the by is umm I'm kinda scared to ask but does Unohana have a thing for Hanatarou? AND DID SHE REALLY TOUCH HIS BUTT? oh wow I love your story you kick ** and I'm just really saying the same thing over and over again so I'll leave it at that I can't wait for your next update how to read the next chapter soon bye!

Oh man, this just keeps getting better and better! I love your use of creative metaphors, unique challenges and tactics. I was so sad to see that there wasn't more to read (yet). And truth be told I have no idea what S could stand for. I'm absolutely clueless on the matter.

Sorry I haven't left of substance or critique; the one thing I was going to mention you seemed to have corrected over the last few chapters. It was the way you seemed to slip from past tense to present, but like I said, that seems to be taken care of. Good job.

Anyway, I'm enjoying this thoroughly! It was the perfect end to a stressful night.

Take care,

- Woffy

Oh my effing God, I'll leave a proper review (or try to) when I finish reading up to where you'd last updated but I have to say this:

YOU ARE A GENIUS. I totally didn't see that coming. But, holy **... The IMAGERY.

Will be back later when I've both caught my breathe and have ceased rolling around on the floor.

- Woffy

omg! Such a twist... is like a hanatarou harem! update soon or you might face the wrath of... something...