Very moving and well done. I would like to see you explore your characters more deeply in your future fics, because you definitely have the potential for it. Again, excellent job.

i absolutely love this story. i think you captured the mood of the show very well. i applaud you on getting the characters right! ah, nathan! i hope he's not dead. i think that's what heidi is hoping, too. well, good work! i like the fact that your grammar and spelling is good, too.