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| FORD B 2008-02-06 ch 9,  | abuseCongradulations! I hope you and your new child have many fun memories and moments! I do await to read the next installment but take your time and try to get as much sleep as you can. Babies have hours where they decide to wake up when you need to sleep, sort of like a built in sensor knowing what you are doing. Good luck and God bless with it all and hear from you later! |
| sarbey 2008-02-05 ch 9, | abuseDon't worry we'll be waiting patiently. sarbey |
| FORD B 2008-01-23 ch 8, | abuseVery interesting turn. Looking forward to more! |
| sarbey 2008-01-22 ch 8, | abuseVery intriguing. Can't wait to see more of this character. Loved how you were able to create this scene with so little spoken words, 'cause that's not something many authors can. Cheers sarbey |
| FORD B 2008-01-16 ch 7, | abuseVery good! Seriously, those two have been dancing around their feelings for years. |
| sarbey 2008-01-12 ch 7, | abuseAh, how sweet. I love friendship scenes like this. Daniel really hid the nail on the head. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. sarbey |
| zafaran 2008-01-11 ch 6, | abuseI just found this series, and I've thoroughly enjoyed the chapters you have posted so far. It's one of the rarer crosses I've seen, but you're doing a very good job on it, and I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing the upcoming chapters. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm |
| FORD B 2008-01-08 ch 6, | abuseThese, snippets I think is the right word, are really good. I hope to read more soon! |
| sarbey 2007-12-31 ch 6, | abuseHey First of all a very happy new year. This is the first thing I read in 2008 (I'm from Germany, we get the new year a few hours earlier) and I loved it. I've read a few Stargate- Pretender Crossover over the years but you somehow manage to make it believable which is a first. I especially like the Sam Carter Ms Parker frienship and the subtle hints at ships. I'll be waiting for the next part. Cheers sarbey |
| gatewatcher 2007-12-25 ch 3, | abuseI enjoyed the Swing, Swing story. Sweet, simple. so Jack. Nice job! |
| sarbey 2007-12-19 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great story. It's a shame you get so little reviews. I'll be waiting for the next part. |
| Alexpat1 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat chaptewr, I can't wait till you update. |
| lkhoward88 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait to see what Jack thinks of this development! |
| qqball 2007-12-06 ch 2, | abusegood story and idea. |