glad she picked edward! i hope the volturi kill jake then they can be happy!

Very intense, looking forward to more hopefully soon!

whens the next chapter coming?Lol. Love it. Mwah

wow. please continue!

Very nice

That was sad for Edward, but I still prefer Jacob and Bella. Hope that you didn't stop writing the story. Hopefully you update soon.

I love your story. It's so heart-breaking...but it really draws you in.
I can't wait to see how the end turns out. I'm a die hard edward fan so i hope bella ends up with him!

It's so... sad. How they can't have a happy ending.

I don't know if you would like a review, but I am still fiving it, I guess. Well it was a good story and hopefully you will cosider for Jacob to stay with Bella. It would be nice if at least in your story they stay together. Again,it is a good plot. Hope that you keep adding chapters. :)

I like it! It's fast paced and exciting, and it's really attention grabbing. Nice opening. Keep going!

WOW ._.
i havent thought.. of THAT...
it scares me.. if it is like that...
you write great! you should write more!!
awesome!