Reviews for Proving Ground

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The defenastrator 2008-06-04 ch 10,	abuseYou had to do it. I can't say i didn't see it coming although the question is how long will it take them and who will be the first to speak up. The government is kind of stupid for putting Ron on a mission with Kim even after conditioning and brain washing there connection is just too strong the minute they see each other Ron's brain washing will begin to fail. Now on to the rest of my review and my signature quote "Kim this pity fiesta is over" and "Ron, I couldn't save the world with out you." are the best lines that come to mind right off the bat of course something better will come to mind after I finish and sent the review. I don't know if I've reviewed the other chapters but this review will only be on this one If i haven't reviewed the other chapters notify me and i shall review them. If I may assume that Ron's old memories are completely unaccessible except for a few key indexes (for lack of a better term) Ron should have much come back to him at the sight of Kim. I do like how seems to slip into his boyfriend/Ron frame of mind seeing deep into her emotions and his subconscious instantly trying to figure out why she was sad (am I reading to much into this?) Also if his memory loss is as complete as you betrayed it to be Ron wouldn't know what a terminator was and as a side note I would like to point out that in the show there would not be a terminator only a weird parody of terminator (probably Bricknaotor)
GhostDragon269 2008-05-30 ch 10,	abuseI was right...? Cool.XD Update soon, I have a feeling that the next chapter is going to be really good. Ghost Dragon, out.
grs100 2008-05-28 ch 10,	abuseArgh, Cliffie! Can't wait for Kim to recognise RS.
Vaapad 2008-05-28 ch 10,	abuseSweet Chappie Update soon!!
dave 2008-05-28 ch 10, anon.	abuseNice update. This cliffy err cliffhanger makes me anxious to see the next chapter.
CajunBear73 2008-05-28 ch 10,	abuseWithout time to recover, Ron now has to save someone he can't remember, but seems to be so important to him. And he's working with someone that brings out something familiar to him, yet isn't, at the same time. Both are going to have some very fluid emotions flying between the two of them as they go on this mission. So close, yet so far. It's to be a lonely 5 or so years from here on out, huh? CB73
Drag0nf1y 2008-05-28 ch 10,	abuseGreat chapter! Keep it coming!!
Some1outthere 2008-05-16 ch 9,	abuseFantastic job. i love it. please update soon!
Nairobe 2008-05-14 ch 9, anon.	abuseM, very nice, enjoying the story so far, PLs update soon!
GhostDragon269 2008-05-09 ch 9,	abuseI like this story, alot. =D Update soon. Kim is going to find out that Ron is alive in the next chapie isn't she?
crazzykidd44 2008-05-06 ch 9, anon.	abusethis is a good story keep dem chapters comein
CajunBear73 2008-05-05 ch 9,	abuseSo he's just out of his first training exercise and is about to be teamed up with Kim on something he will find is very personal, that is if he could remember his sister or his former fiance'. Betty and Will seem to have figured out who S-1 is. Wonder if Kim will see some similarities from her current 'partner' and her former partner. That is if she can get past the firearms he's carrying... CB73
Drag0nf1y 2008-04-03 ch 8,	abuseKeeping an eye on this one for sure! Booyah!
hope master 2008-03-03 ch 7,	abuseohh dude whats with the pairing change man
swish101 2008-02-21 ch 6,	abuseHey, good plot and dialog. Liked how Ron's character was portrayed. Hope to read more so update soon. Other readers might like to read this too - if you like put it on w w w . justexpressing . com to get some additional reviews. They have a Cartoon category, and a Kim Possible subcat I think/or you can create it. I posted there also. Hope to read more soon !

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