 '-'soni13'-' 2009-01-06 . chapter 1This is great! XD poor al |
 Riku 2008-09-28 . chapter 1 You need to make alot more of these. Great story and I feel sorry for Al. I'm glad he has his body back |
 JAPublishing 2008-06-06 . chapter 1O.O Poor Al... that's all i can say. Funny! XD |
 CreativebutLazy 2008-06-03 . chapter 1the good news is, given Hiromu Arakawa's sense of humor and brand of comedy, there is a HIGH possibility of her dabbling into this problem a bit when Al finally does get his body back.
Good job on the story. Very funny:) |
 Miskcat 2008-05-23 . chapter 1Wonderful! Having just written a story myself where Al got his body back, I was wondering if I should write a separate little thingie describing exactly this problem -- but you've done it perfectly instead. Heehee! So much to think about, and one can't just assume Al would immediately be comfortable back in his body. I'm so glad you wrote about it. |
 evelynvm29 2008-03-25 . chapter 1It was a fun story |
 Silverneko9lives0 2008-02-14 . chapter 1Poor Al! At least he's still a gentleman (that's how I always thought of him). |
 fullofmetal 2007-12-09 . chapter 1Puberty. *snicker* Poor guy... |
 White Butterfly 2007-12-08 . chapter 1Heehee, Al regaining his body fics are always fun to read, and this one didn't fail in that regard at all.
Was very amused by this, although I feel a bit sorry for him. |
 Colonel Bastard 2007-12-06 . chapter 1I love this fic. Everyone was very in-character( I can imagine Al being all happy about getting hurt and Havoc whistling whenever Hawkeye stood up)and it was so funny(like how Winry was all 'Yeah, Ed, I see you...but look at Al!' and just about every other thing in this story).
~C.B.
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 DemonRaily 2007-12-06 . chapter 1=) |
 Crystal Mage 2007-12-06 . chapter 1XD Poor, poor Al. I've wondered that, too. It's got to suck to be returned to a body that's beginning the throes of puberty. XD Oh, Al. I love him so much. XD
Beyond puberty, I love how you describe Al's reactions to being human. He's so cute, and it's so like him to get excited over twisting his ankle. XD Adorable~
Also! Miniskirts! Good job. ;D I love Mustang~ X'3
I dunno what else to say. You seriously made my day. Thanks! |
 Asj Johnson 2007-12-06 . chapter 1Heh, heh... Kind'a funny. I've never pictured something like that happening to Al, though. ^_^" |
 Legendary Chimera 2007-12-06 . chapter 1Bwahahaha! When you first "apologized" to Al, I got a little scared like you were going to kill him off. >_< Poor little guy, it amazes me that no one I've read so far has done this take. It was a scream! :D |
 Griselda Banks 2007-12-05 . chapter 1Aw, poor Al. I can just see the human form of my avatar, sweat-dropping all over the place. But I'm glad you wrote this; nobody ever writes about this kind of thing, though it makes a lot of sense that Al would have this problem while he's getting used to his body again.
It's all Mustang's fault, for enforcing that miniskirt rule DX
This was a very cute, very funny story. I liked it a lot, and I loved the little comments you made in parentheses, like "Everyone turned around (well, Ed and Al turned – the others were already facing the right direction)."
Keep writing! ^_^ |