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| Laura.S-x 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseHey This Was..Good, Sweet,Touching. But A Little Out Of Character...But It Was Good. Is It Only A Oneshot? Update Soon. Laura xx |
| Fire Away EC 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseStupid Max stupidly leaving. Cute though, and very much appreciated. |
| disneydork 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was so cute! PLAESE continue it! It seems like it could be so much more than a oneshot! PLEASE! |
| anonymouse13 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseHm... I like it. You should probably go over it a few more times, since you said you haven't yet. Good job! |
| Cupid's Jinx 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Carlisle. That. Was. Bloody. Brilliant. I. Don't. Know. Why. I'm. Writing. Like. This. Ahem Yeah, I love it. Pure geneous (sp?) Lyra -x-x-x- |
| AsanteSanaSquashBanana 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseaw very, very good! love the ending! so sweet! |