AWW! CUTE!

Awh. Short, sweet and simple.

I believe it was worth my time. I like father-son bonding fluff/angst. And the ending rounds off the story well.

Good job!

- Maisy x

Emopants… haha. I like that. Ahem.

Look, Listen, Learn. I adore anything as references Marcy, even by accident. Oh, but the stuff about Kyo always gets me. So perfect. Outside on the Inside. Impossible. Mm. Fic now.

“I used to sneak to the telephone and dial numbers until I could hear a voice on the other side, even if they were speaking gibberish. That stopped when Mom saw the phone bill for that month.”
- Oh my god. That is so beautiful and funny and awful. God. I can’t wait to tell Mimi to read this.

Mm, and the refrain-thing - Look at me, speak to me, listen to me, acknowledge me…

“And Akito, when I was allowed in the Main House, used to pass me in the hallways and walk into me, as though I was just a ghost.
I didn’t exist.”
- Because Akito is so screwed up and horrible - and, Kyo is a loserface… ah… - and Kyo is so… and then just, “I didn’t exist.” That simple. Impossible again. Ah.

Ooh. Green-painting and smashing people’s faces in. Oh Kyo.

“I don’t know if I’m remembering right, but I think I did smash that kid’s face, but with a wall, and seven years after the first impulse.”
- God. I don’t know. I wouldn’t be able to remember either, in all honesty, but it’s different when he can’t.

OH FLUFF. I’m gonna cry. Talks. Haven’t even gotten to them and I know they’ll push me over.

“Shishou, what if I’m broken?”
- Godgodgod.

“He didn’t say that I wasn’t broken, or that it was bad to even think that, but his eyes did, because they cared and they hurt every time I tried to hurt him.”
- Now that is such a lovely sentence…

“Inside. What if the part that makes a person a person isn’t in me? What if it just doesn’t exist?”
- Missing hearts. Iron Henry. Definitely going to cry.

“His eyes were like chocolate, oozy and too sweet.”
- So. Effing. Pretty.

“The blankets tented over his head was making his hair stand up weirdly, because he’d taken it out of the tie.” And, ah, the details. Funny and cute and realistic and LOVE.

“There’s no part of you that doesn’t exist.”
- Even MORE love. Because, yeah, no, or it wouldn’t be part of him, but it’s so lovely… icon needed, stat. And right here I gave up and just read through, so now to backtrack and review.

“Possibilities were my primary mode of conversation.”
- I… just like that. No solids.

“We survive. Even when you say certain words to me, I can tell when they’re not true.”
- Oh yes. He’s so stable and mature and wonderful, and as you say, basically awesome.

“I wasn’t anything in particular. I just was.”
- Oh Pratchettian. And so lovely.

“It took me a long time, but I finally figured out that it was love. And it was love that made me real.”
- More icons. So lovely.

“And I get this vague, growing feeling that maybe I’ve already paid back my debt, a little bit.”
- Just the best line ever. Damn straight. Oh parent-child pwnage. My favorite. LOVE. I am incoherent in a good way.

I worship you for finishing and posting. So freaking beautiful. *snuggles*