Ah, and so it begins...

You write Voldemort/Bellatrix quite well. I really like this story. It starts out almost innocently, but it ends quite darkly.


It's almost how I had envisioned a dictator gaining followers. First Bella was indoctrinated into pureblood supremecy,then she meets the charismatic leader, and then does not hesitate to do what he asks. It sort of reminded me of the way Hitler gained his followers.

I lurves it! ^_^

I like it. You have a very simple style, which lends itself very well to this piece of writing. I also like your characterisation: Bellatrix is just how I imagined she would be. Your description of Voldemort was very well done too.