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| EdenandDeon 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Very compelling! ~Eden K |
| TyTheStrangeTeenager 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseWow, for a couple of sentences that was deep. Me like ^_^ |
| Antheslovefullmetal 2008-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseITs beutifal but idont know how this qualifys as a fullmetal alchemist fic lol but that doesent matter Your a great writer keep it up |
| DoThePieFace 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh... lol I remember when i always wanted to write dark fics and never really got there. Cause they sucked. Yours are cool tho, specially DWTH. Anyway, cause I'm lazy, the karma the elephant thing was a coke ad lol and Yuri's like yaoi only for chicks XD Hot lesbian sex basically. I wonder if I can write that in a review? Well I'm working for ten hours tomorrow -_-' so i'm going to bed, but I shall talk to you later. And about Set in Stone, yay ur the only one who's reviewed all chapters I think. ^^ I'm re-writing these holidays. I'm up to 6 I think and came to a point where I realised if I wanted to get rid of this random crappy bit that it kills the whole thing -_- so it has to stay. lol. Anyway, i liked the clipped wings bit in this. The repetition gives it a good effect. Keep up the good work. |
| Bar-Ohki 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOh! This is something new... |
| DarkWhiteRose 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseShort but I liked the begin. Update soon. |
| Lakara Valentine 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abusevery strong beginning! plz continue!! |