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Reviews For: Clipped Wings

EdenandDeon
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. Very compelling!
~Eden K
TyTheStrangeTeenager
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseWow, for a couple of sentences that was deep. Me like ^_^
Antheslovefullmetal
2008-02-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseITs beutifal
but idont know how this qualifys as a fullmetal alchemist fic lol
but that doesent matter
Your a great writer
keep it up
DoThePieFace
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseOh... lol I remember when i always wanted to write dark fics and never really got there. Cause they sucked. Yours are cool tho, specially DWTH.

Anyway, cause I'm lazy, the karma the elephant thing was a coke ad lol and Yuri's like yaoi only for chicks XD Hot lesbian sex basically. I wonder if I can write that in a review?

Well I'm working for ten hours tomorrow -_-' so i'm going to bed, but I shall talk to you later. And about Set in Stone, yay ur the only one who's reviewed all chapters I think. ^^ I'm re-writing these holidays. I'm up to 6 I think and came to a point where I realised if I wanted to get rid of this random crappy bit that it kills the whole thing -_- so it has to stay. lol.

Anyway, i liked the clipped wings bit in this. The repetition gives it a good effect. Keep up the good work.
Bar-Ohki
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abuseOh! This is something new...
DarkWhiteRose
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abuseShort but I liked the begin. Update soon.
Lakara Valentine
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abusevery strong beginning! plz continue!!
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