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| Luiz4200 2008-04-06 ch 10, | abuseWhatever you do, give one happy ending to the next story. What about calling it 'The Return of Raija'? |
| Luiz4200 2008-02-27 ch 9, | abuseGood thing bringing the monks. Please update. |
| Luiz4200 2008-02-08 ch 8, | abusePlease update. And make Raija stop calling Azali 'Mother'. |
| Luiz4200 2008-01-16 ch 7, | abuseI hope Hannibal finds Raija before Azali does. Please update. |
| Luiz4200 2008-01-03 ch 6, | abuseRaimundo: “ Raija. Welcome back. Did you have a nice visit with you family?” Reija: “ Yes I did Master. I have someone I want you to meet.” Shouldn't it be "Reija. Welcome back."? Other than that good fic. Please update. |
| Luiz4200 2007-12-14 ch 4, | abuseThis story is interesting. Please update. |
| Luiz4200 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter but I can't help but think Azali will trick Raija into thinking Reija, Kara and Hannibal lied to him; or that Raija is just pretending to believe them. Please update. |
| Luiz4200 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abusePlease update. |