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Reviews For: xiaolin showdown: The return of Azali

Luiz4200
2008-04-06
ch 10,
abuseWhatever you do, give one happy ending to the next story. What about calling it 'The Return of Raija'?
Luiz4200
2008-02-27
ch 9,
abuseGood thing bringing the monks. Please update.
Luiz4200
2008-02-08
ch 8,
abusePlease update. And make Raija stop calling Azali 'Mother'.
Luiz4200
2008-01-16
ch 7,
abuseI hope Hannibal finds Raija before Azali does. Please update.
Luiz4200
2008-01-03
ch 6,
abuseRaimundo: “ Raija. Welcome back. Did you have a nice visit with you family?”

Reija: “ Yes I did Master. I have someone I want you to meet.”

Shouldn't it be "Reija. Welcome back."? Other than that good fic. Please update.
Luiz4200
2007-12-14
ch 4,
abuseThis story is interesting. Please update.
Luiz4200
2007-12-09
ch 2,
abuseGood chapter but I can't help but think Azali will trick Raija into thinking Reija, Kara and Hannibal lied to him; or that Raija is just pretending to believe them. Please update.
Luiz4200
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abusePlease update.
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