Really nice, this story has granted you acceptance into my yakitate community :)

It's actually a really nice character study of Kawachi. Actually I was kinda mad when they decided not to work with Kawachi in Yakitate 9! I think he should have more role.

I like this! Kawachi is one of my favorite characters from the series--it's a shame how he is cast aside even though he's proved himself many times. It peeks at his feeling without being too angsty. This is a refreshingly nice story, especially compared to all the crappy stories that inhabit this category. :)

Hahaha hey this is really nice...

I never really noticed if Kawachi says 'What was that?!' or not,but still it's awesome :)