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Jianna
2008-09-17
ch 10,
abuseNo. Brandon you belong with Kelly! Don't you realize that? Just kidding. Though I'm not. ;) Another great chapter. Loved it. And New York is a lot closer to DC than LA is. *cheesy grin*
Jianna
2008-09-17
ch 9,
abuseAw... I much prefer Dylan and Brandon as friends than enemies. Thanks for patching them up. Loved the chap. Love the story. :)
Jianna
2008-09-17
ch 8,
abuseSo it's been a while since I've been able to read, but wow. So intense. Poor Dylan. I didn't think those words would ever come from my lips, or rather, fingertips... LOL
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 7,
abuseAh. Kelly and New York. Makes sense. And very interesting. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 6,
abuseAck! It ate my review! Anyway... That was a GREAT chapter. That was a hit a long time waiting. Since season four, I believe. So way to go Dylan. But at the same time, poor Brandon.
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 5,
abuse*sniffle*

That was BEAUTIFUL! Such a perfect, bittersweet kiss.

Thanks for another amazing chapter!
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 4,
abuseWow. I'm shocked Dylan trusted Brandon to take Kelly home. Couldn't he just feel the chemistry sparking between the two? Ah well. Loved it. As usual. You are a very talented writer and I'm very interested in where this is going.
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 3,
abuse*sigh*

That was a lovely chapter. Kelly and Brandon so belong together. Damn writers. Not you. The writers from 90210. They're the ones who got it wrong. Though I guess that leaves the doors open for all the fan fiction writers, right?

Anyhoo... Still love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 2,
abuseAw... Poor Kelly. I love how you're writing the interaction with the whole Dylan-Kelly-Brandon thing. Dylan coming up behind Kelly right as she's talking to Brandon... Very Dylan-like. Anyhoo... Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
Jianna
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseO... So far so good. I hope I'll have a chance to read all of your chapters thus far. My interest is incredibly piqued. Brandon returning to Beverly Hills (always a good thing) and Kelly leaving?! Loving it!
brankel1
2008-02-20
ch 9, anon.
abuseStill hope you get Bran & Keltogether and Dylan and Bren.keep it coming.
Marlene
2008-02-01
ch 8, anon.
abuseLoved it. Hope Brenda comes back so she and Dylan can be together, and Kelly&Brandon.
Crystal
2008-01-28
ch 8, anon.
abuseI prefer Dylan & Brandon to be friends, instead of fighting. I really hope they work out their differences. Otherwise, enjoyable reading, look forward to the next chapter.
brankel1
2008-01-28
ch 8, anon.
abuseHopefully Dylan goes to Bren.And hopefully Bran follows Kel.Or Kelly decides to stay with Bran.
Crystal
2008-01-16
ch 7, anon.
abuseI think that moving to a new area will be good for Kelly. I'm curious to see who's at the door since it doesn't seem like it's Donna. I look forward to the next chapter.
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