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| cancsifan 2007-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseNicely done. I didn't feel the angst, just anticipation and wonder. She's looking at everything through new eyes, including Grissom's old socks :) I "needed" this. Thanks. |
| seattlecsifan 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI like it. |
| sprat 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusegreat short story |
| My Kate 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusebrilliant!...got my heart racing...at first I wasn't sure if this was a "hello" or "goodbye" piece...heartwarming...would you consider this to be an introductory chapter on getting back together...after ANY of their spats?...thanks for this tale... |
| jenstog 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abusei heart this... though it's far too short. |
| CSI Supervisor 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I was amazed and almost cried... |
| mossirgligrD 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG - yes that was ansty but in a good way, if that's possible. The bit that got to me the most was that he was wearing odd socks, poor Grissom :( Your ending was perfect. |
| csijones 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseNice and simple story but its what we all need at this time. :) |
| shadows-light91 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was really good. I enjoyed how you worked the feeling of angst throughout, and the end was sweet with the two of them together. Good job! JaFaRCrAzY |
| litbuff 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was so intense. We really need that on the show! Great job! |
| dirtylabrat 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseYummy! :) |
| gsr4ever 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. I liked it a lot! |
| CSIGeekFan 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. I like how you weave endearing traits into an intense moment. |