This is beautiful. You've gotten Spinelli's voice perfect.

This broke my heart.

That was really great. I'm so sad about them killing off Georgie. GSpin could have been so cute.

that was great...and he calls JZ the 'Warped One'

Not bad, I think the story has promise especially if it was developed into something more than a story of regrets. I'd love to see it expand into how Spinelli learns to cope, or maybe even having Georgie come back somehow. Anyway still very nice to see some GSPin, too few stories deal in GSPIN imo.