haha total like! ) good show!

Ha, I cracked up at the end.

Just great. Two thumbs up!

Good Story I found the line "Who's the Maglet now?" very entertaining and i could actually hear Daine saying that.

Friendmaker10

i'm dong lust what you asked me to and adding the story again.

do another chapter please!

oh my gosh, that was great! I really liked that one, very few people can write an M rated fic and make it worth while

interesting...not like some i've seen. that's a good thing, though. i was just a bit confused by the fact that there was a stormwing, and more confused by the fact that daine knew...him? her? it? whatever. it was good.

wow. you know you could make this longer if you wanted. pretty good, though wouldn't daine already be with numair? i liked it.