Of course the most dramatic point, and you haven't updated for a year... Well, I hope you update soon and keep up the good work, dark

Oh no! I have a horrible feeling that something bad is going to happen to Watari or Tatsumi and then the other is going to feel bad about things. Ah! I'm so curious. Stupid computer, spit up the other chappie so I can get my update! I loved it!

Hugs, loves, and cuddles!
RosePetal

Great, its getting to the action part, lets find out whats really going on, Watari is not as jealous as tatsumi is, or pehaps he is better at hinding it. Now cards, for both of them is this fate or a tramp, humm, things are going to get ugly, specaily if they keep bickering, love and work make an explosive convination, its so much fun. ja ne

What a delight! The thought of Tatsumi and Watari in formal wear is enough to drool over, the complications introduced through Kowabara and Ran delicious, the thought of Tatsumi and Watari playing Holmes and Watson (with Ran as Crowder) a delight, and the very real danger shown at the end gives a wonderful chill. I very eagerly look forward to more.

Why do I get the feeling things are not gonna go smoothly from here on -_- *sight* Still grat chapter we have a new character in place can't wait to see how the drama unfolds :)

KYA! Watari, what the heck are you doing!! I can't believe you've got him flirting with Ran again, right after Tatsumi gets out of the bathroom.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

As always, I loved this chapter. You've got so many elements working for you. Of course, no one really expects Tatsumi to be so jealous and possessive sometimes, which makes it all the more interesting. And Watari is just clueless when it comes to people liking him. I also think that there's more to Ran and Kowabara than meets the eye. I can't wait to see what happens in their relationship. Yay!

Also, sorry that you've gotten no reviews from me lately. I moved. Lots of luvs and cuddles (and a mental cookie)

RosePetal

Oh O_o that was a very interesting ending so what type of creature is visiting Ran while he sleeps some sort of guardian, demon? by the way Tatsumi makes for one hot sick jealous boyfriend XD and I can't believe Watari forgot about Tatsumi because he was "not flirting" with Ran.Well can't wait to see what you have in store for these love birds ^_~

Oh T^T I so regret not being able to read this chapter as soon as you posted but school has been keeping me busy anyways great chapter all the fluffiness made me melt these two are just so cute and I have you to thank for that and that new guy Ran seems like he's going to make the trip oh so much more memorable well I’m of to read the next chapter ^-^

Tension! Me gusta! :D

Wohoo, for someone who's just fallen in love and should be blind to anything else, Watari is showing remarkable interest in their case...wonder what'll come out of that!
Anyway,I hope Tatsumi will get well soon ;)
By the way, I'm back from Russia and should be able to review a bit more regularly now!

Oh no, Tatsumi's jealous! However bad that emotion may be, it shows the depth of his feelings for Watari. If he didn't care about the little blond fluffball, then he wouldn't get jealous. So cute. I love the two of them in this story, and I can't wait to figure out what happens at the party and for Watari's birthday. Loved it and can't wait for more.

Luvs and cuddles

RosePetal

What a great chapter!!

I loved this chapter for several reasons. The first is that we get to see Tatsumi in a more vulnerable state, something which rarely happens. The next is that we got to see Watari being the one to give all the care and affection for once rather than being looked after. I also love the fact that Watari got caught up with Ran. I think I'm sensing jealousy later on from a certain sick Shinigami. Loved it darling.

RosePetal

This is absolutely excellent! Last night, I was bored out of my mind and saw this gem among the pile of fanfics available, and thought, "why not?" I just finished chapter ten (hence the review), and I can't wait to read the rest of what you have in store! Tatsumi and Watari, while not official, are my favorite couple in Yami no Matsuei. I love how you've portrayed them.