 misako princess 2009-09-11 . chapter 1This is the best story about Endymion I have ever read. A read it 1 time years ago on SMR and lost it later. But the words "...yet, somehow, without light, darkness can still exist." stay wth me printed on my wall. Antigone wow, really exelent job.Hope that you will write more storie like that. |
 Lalaith Yamainu 2008-12-03 . chapter 1No matter how many times I read this, it still gives me goosebumps. |
 lfleurdelys 2008-03-15 . chapter 1I saw your AN but I have to say that this is one of my favorite SM stories. I read it a couple of years ago and I still love it! ^_^ |
 spiegel-octopi 2007-01-27 . chapter 1I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!
it's so charmingly simple. |
 Lu Ishii 2006-07-31 . chapter 1Great fic ^_^ |
 moonangel1 2005-09-19 . chapter 1Wow. I remember reading this a long time ago and I just stumbled across it again today. It's such a gorgeous story. It really gets to you. It's been so long since I read BSSM fanfics. I miss your old stories! |
 elianthos 2005-06-23 . chapter 1Beautiful and touching and smart and everything good. *bows my head to your abilities so masterly displayed in all your fics I've read so far*. |
 Terri 2005-02-08 . chapter 1 LOVE the story! |
 Miss Christina 2005-01-22 . chapter 1Omg. I was just recommended this fanfic to read, and I am SO thankful I read it. This story is absolutely AMAZING. I admit, in the beginning I was terribly confused. All I could think was "Usagi dead? Usagi DEAD?! WHY IS SHE DEAD?!" and the fact that time travel always confuses the hell outta me didn't help. But you managed to pull it all together in the end, and I actually understood how everything works! It's absolutely incredible how it does actually all fit together - like Megumi would never die in the future if Sean didn't kill Usagi in the past because he wanted revenge over what happened in the future... x_x jeez putting it like that really makes the world spin. But it does make perfect sense. I love it! Pure genius. ^^ |
 lightofsaturn 2004-03-17 . chapter 1Very, very good. You have talent. |
 bebe1984 2003-11-25 . chapter 1Its a GREAT STORY. It shows the true feeling of endymion towards serenity. I love this story.. great job and keep up the good work. |
 Prosperina 2002-11-25 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 recie 2002-01-16 . chapter 1Oh.. my lord. That was so horrifically/wonderfully tragic and bittersweet. It's ideas like these that are the best to read.
You say the writing style is old. I did notice a bit of amateurish-ness (not a word, I'm sure ^^;;) in the beginning, but as it moved on, the story swept up the reader in its momentum. And that's when a truly gifted writer is recognized. |
 Liz 2001-09-07 . chapter 1 O gosh *i want to say something else but...kids read this stuff* that was unbelievable. It was much better than most of the fics i read here and you said it was one of your early works! wow. O and hey hey just so ya know...this made tears stream down my face. The darkness and the light is such a wonderful theme for stories isn't it!!? |
 Kawaiibaka 2001-09-04 . chapter 1*sigh* damn that was romantic...*grabs a tissue* and a tear jerker too. It fills in all the spaces there was in Serenity and Endy's love in the anime. You were right by the "unlearned and disjointed" part, some of the sentences don't seem to tie up somehow. But never the less, it was still well written. ( better then i can do! HEY! I'm only a highschool freshmen!) *Grins* |