Wow... Wow... Just... Wow.

I love this one-shot, too. And you did really well on the whole angst thing, considering I'm what my sister calls "Emo"! Hah! What does she know?! Anyway, I want to say that it was a good idea to have Kagome remember InuYasha with true regret and not the manga's "Oh. My. God. He just left me for her again. Urgh, What a jerk! What did I see in him anyway?", you know? But here, you gave here some depth and though it was short for my tastes, for a one-shot it was good. And juicy shitz! (Your words, not mine.)Hee, hee. And I loved the little snippets of memories in italics. That made a huge difference to the feel of the one-shot. A good one. So, I hope you have all your dreams fufilled but more importantly, I hope you always have fun writing!

Good story...
good angst and tragedy (if you don't like kikyo)
Nice Work.

This is so perfect!! I love it! *adds to favs*

xoxo,
Mikalah

Aww, that was soo sad!! :( Poor Kagome, in reality that is how it must be like for her, oh my godz you got it perfectly and wrote this like a true fanfiction goddess xD Awesome job!!

Kind of like it...
kind of...
It's good, I suppose.

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Ah, that was sad. I liked the way you added in the bolds. Different.

And the way you worded the beginning and ending the same way was just PERFECT. Very angsty. :) Poor Kagome.