I love it. Requiem for a Dream is one of the most powerful movies I've ever seen and I'm surprised there aren't more fanfics about it. This one is short but does a great job catching up on the four characters right after the movie's end. I think if you wrote more it would be great, but it's good as it is. Nice job! _

Amazing

DUDE.

i totally love this movie,

and your fanfic is awesome so far.

one thing you could keep in mind,

though it would prolly confuse readers,

is that the book of the movie was written

without quotes or paragraphs.

so, using your story as an example,

it was like this:

"Time for your dinner, Mrs. Goldfarb…

Sara looked up from the TV and nodded slightly, giving a small smile to the attendant as he brought in her food. She could no longer do such simple tasks as feeding herself. All she did was watch TV, specifically the Tappy Tibbons Show. And on to step three, Tappy proclaimed, This drives most people…crazy. Drives me crazy, that’s for damn sure… the attendant muttered as he sat down next to Sara. He held up a spoonful of tuna melt towards her. Open…Sara kept her eyes on the TV as she opened her mouth. The attendant shoved the spoon inside, getting another spoonful of the slop that couldn’t be deemed anything but disgusting. Sara never continued, …and he’s planning to get married this summer. Will everyone give juicy welcome to Harry Goldfarb! "

your fanfic is good as it is though,

but that idea was just a suggestion.

lookin forward to the next chapter!

was just great.I finally got around to seeing this movie for the first time last night and just loved it!Now that,was a piece of art this,is a piece of art fiction.

that was pretty good. :D

I like it. The movie blew my mind and left me quivering on my carpet, so I apprecitae finding a fellow fan.

As much as I love this movie and I feel the author really embraced the nature of the characters, I felt this was a bit jumbled and didn't come across as well as it would have had I been watching in on screen. JMO.