awesome...

this could totally have a next chapter... it's really open ended... although a dunt like meany jareth, which he sounds liek at the end :S

anyways, brilliant story! i'd love to hear more :P

XxoxX

Your Story doesn't suck at all, In fact your first chapter is written very well. The plot is very interesting. I hope you update soon!

LadySnape1987

i loved it

THIS IS AMAZING! I love it! Please Keep Writing!

cool, your first labyrinth fic!

i like it, keep up the good work

Great story! Sequel please!

A very different way to bring the two together. Nice one shot.

The quality of this chapter is very good. Are you to be updating this story soon. :-)

Oh, I liked this a lot. Are you sure you want it to remain a oneshot? Not that it isn't good as a oneshot, but maybe you'd like to continue it. Just a suggestion.

Your's,
SeductiveSorceress...aka Zoz.

Very Nice story so far I hope to read more !


Lizzy