Haha. Fawesome.

"“Mm,” Celes nodded. “Someone said something like that last night.”

Kira started laughing and nudged Celes with her shoulder."
Oh yeah. So not suspicious at ALL. dxD

Oh, burn. d:P

Oh.
Wow.
You've got me down to a T, don't you? dxD

"He folded his arms across his chest. “I guess your types are the pretty boy’s, huh?” He nodded from behind me and I turned, seeing Race walk towards me.

“Better him than you,” I sniped angrily."
Oh yeah. There's absolutely NO chemistry and NO oh so foreseeable future romance for these two there. dxD

"“** you,” I whispered loudly."
Hehe. I can see you doing that in a sarcastic sing-song voice. dxD

"As I was walking away with Race, I heard Celes sharply say Kira’s name."
Hmm...I'm curious...I can't remember what the ending was that you told me before, so now I can't wait to read it! dxD Hurry up and write! dxD

Great story, I'm really loving the whole Harry Potter story without Harry Potter lol! Seriously, though, I love the humor and the originality. If only the chapters were longer... :)

"I woke up with a jolt and checked my watch. It was a little after 6 P.M. I let out a soft sigh and thought about going back to sleep when I heard someone shift around in their bed. I raised my head a bit and saw Kira shuffle in her bed. I smiled to myself and said softly, “Good morning.”"
Isn't it 6 AM then?

Hehehe, yes I do sleep late, and I enjoy it, thank you very much dxD *hey, someone's gotta defend Jordan while she's asleep dxD*

Hahahaha...Kira's so mean. I love her d:P

As your editor, on this part:
"“You better stay away from Race. That freaking jerk.”"
I believe the "You better stay away from Race." has it's own quotation marks within the dialogue quotations themselves, since you are mimicking her exact words. d:P

Okay, I'm done being a grammar nazi/editor. d:P

Dude, was there anything you DIDN'T bring from home?? dxD

Wow. You've turned us into Catholic/Christian school girls with snake patches d:P Oh wait...that's what the uniforms really ARE like...damn. I've never noticed that before. Yeesh. ><

Tsk tsk tsk...obscene finger gestures from such a pristine girl! dxD *Yeah, okay no more The Breakfast Club for me...I'm quoting it for God's sake! dxD*

Nice schedules. d:D

Haha, she SOUNDS fine d:P When can I meet her? dxD jk jk

A point...or ten, even, huh? Damn.

Yeesh, aren't we anxious to know his views on you, Charlie?

"“How about I give you your own private tour of Hogwarts,” Race whispered into my ears."
O.O Back AWAY, Charlie! "Player" *taking the cue of the gangsta act, and for lack of a better term* status right there! NO ONE should go that fast!

Haha jet lag d:P Nice.

Wow. Quick and to the point, isn't she?

"Slytherin, is it? The Hat asked inside my mind.

Although I was prepared for it, it still surprised me. Of course, I answered back.

Is that your final answer? You’re quite sure this is what you want? The Hat asked me again."
Hmm...possibility that Charlie MAY hace fit somewhere else as well?

"I was beginning to think that there were no girls with guy names in Europe. How boring."
If that's true, then yes. Very. d:P

dxD! Gotta love the gangsta act!

"Kira laughed and lifted up the back of her ponytail. On the back of her neck was a tattoo of a dragon."
*squeal* SWEET!
Aw damn. It was a temp. dxD

o.O Kira whispering it or the HAT whispering it? I'm confused now...

"Professor Dumbledore sat back in his seat and Professor Snape stepped up, with a parchment in hand. Haven’t these people heard of lined college-ruled paper?"
Yeah, I've always wondered about that!

Aw, poor Christian! D:

Slytherin, woot woot! d:D

Hehe I went to the mall today and almost bought a Slytherin shirt from Suncoast cuz they were having this huge ol' sale, but I had no more cash dxD

""Connor told me there were about 1,0 students at Hogwarts. Which means there would be about 250 students in each House. Which also boils down to there being about 62 students that are the same age as us.”"
Wow. Too much math in one breath. Head...hurts...must...stop...dxD

"Another point for the oh-so-perfect Race. Damn, our kids are going to look beautiful."
dxD!

"“I just wanted to walk with you on this sunny day,” he commented."
Cute. Cheesy, but cute d:P

Lucy has an AWESOME name in this story d:D

"Race gave me a look that seemed as if he was seeing me in a new light. Then he announced loudly, “I think I’m in love with this girl.”"
d:D! He's not one of those cliche main guy characters, he's human! THERE'S the writer Mel I know and love! dxD

"I chuckled. “Want to show these Brits how it’s done?”"
Hell yes!

Oh...

You meant the Jordan in the story ):

... right



odd, but I like it.

Absolutely awesome. Loved the gangsta act...I have friends who would do the same thing. Update soon, this is good!

Again i love this story what a shocker we have a hot snape um there seems to be a story behind this. PLZ udate soon i can't wait for the next chapter

"No **!"
Yeah. You capture me so well dxD

Yeah, Mel. Are you THAT desperate for friends? D:

Hahaha, "O burn" dxD

"Give me attention.”
dxD!

O...Race is coming, Mel/Lynna/Charlie d;D

I like his name. d:D

Haha, after I read "Kira Perfect" and "It was silent for a couple of seconds before a loud burst of chirping sounded in the forest." I imagined that stereotype *silence...cricket...cricket...* thing dxD

"“Um… possibly still with my balls intact,” I laughed. Jordan and I grew apart in 9th grade and we joked about how in 11th grade, we didn’t have the guts to talk to each other and thus, our balls ran away. It was a bit of a private joke."
Hey, I know that joke! dxD

o.o' You HAD to make him hear us, huh? dxD

"Ew, you lecherous kid.”"
dxD

"When Calvin (for some reason, Calvin was really into communism) died last year, in my junior year, I cried so much. But the next day, he was right in class with us and I screamed. And then I laughed because he died by slipping on a patch of ice and broke his neck."
dxD!

Healthy but dead, huh? d:P

"...landed on my stomach. “I pushed her off of me and rubbed my head and my stomach."
You added an extra quotation mark d:P

Shut up. The grammar nazi does not sleep as I read and review dxD