that's a nice poem. you're good at this!

Dont we all have little fantasies we wish were reality. But if they were I guess we wouldnt have dreams then...Aw screw it! I want the fantasies!
I liked your poem. It actually made me think about my dreams and fantasies which are both different. I think dreams and fantasies are very different. Dreams are something you strive towards, fantasies are something you wish to happen to you but know they wont.
Well thats all I gotta say about that. Good job.
Jaa.