Why does it has to be Raphie?.. I just couldn't tear myself away while reading. Had to finish it before I went to sleep. No regrets though.

OMG! That was such a sad ending! Brilliant story! Angel x

No way! Raph died?! I didn't see that coming but I agree with you, I couldn't really see another ending for this story. The dream was really touching and it makes a Raph fan, like myself, feel better about him dying. Great job on this story :D

Oh no...I didn't expect Raphael to actually die, after Donnie tried to hard to save him! So sad...

That was so sad! Definitely felt like the ending it needed though. Great job.

This story is amazing. I'm kinda in love with it actually. You're writing style is wonderful and your characterization is amazing. I don't know why you aren't getting more reviews. Keep up the excellent work!

Two think I can't believe here : How I manage to miss your story for so long and why he dosen't have more review.

You really make me cry here. I really wish Donnie or anyone would find something to help Raph.

Come one Raphie, you have to make it.

Well write, more soon please

Aw so sad. I hope Raph lives :(

You almost has me crying with Donnie with this one... My god. Very well written and I absolutly loved it.

keep going.

once again, you've written an amazing raph tragedy story. before i just added 'imprisoned' as one of my favorite stories but after reading this, i thought, "to hell with that! this chick is going on my fave authors' list!", which was immediately done after reading the most recent chapter. man, you really love torturing poor raphie, huh? but i think i'm worse because i love reading it:)

btw i didn't review the rest of it, but i loved the conclusion to 'imprisoned'. the scene when leo was trying to get him to eat and raph was silently crying... oh, so sweet and sad at the same time. so glad his bros came through for him and you didn't let him die, but then again i knew you wouldn't do that to him.

please update this soon! i hope raph will be okay!!

Goodness! This is rather sad! Keep going: I am really enjoying this!

This is really really well written and although the poisoned thing has been done to death, this one feels different. Your characterizations are spot on, and I love it!

Please continue!

*pats Raphie's arm* I know how it feels dude. I hate needles too. That one part made me cringe. Anyway, I'm hooked, you've got me wanting more. Please update!

W-K

Gee... ya think? *kicks Raphael in the head* *beep* nut. Don't yell at Donnie... he can bill nye your butt.

it was a quick update :) I was surprised when it popped up on my inbox. Nice job. Keep going.

W-K

*watches in box suspiciously*