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The Capslock Savior
2009-08-11 . chapter 13
this is really good, and i cant wait for the n ext chapter!
SparxFlame
2009-02-01 . chapter 13
Wow... this is your first story? You have got to be kidding me. This is AMAZING! Please update. I love this story. I'm hooked.
rachel
2009-01-03 . chapter 13
please finish it! please! i want to know what happens wiht dante and artemis.
Jesse
2009-01-03 . chapter 7
haha that was great. I love the "god must really hate you" line.
Artemis_Fowl_II
2008-10-18 . chapter 13
please continue it am are AWSOME!
M.L.E.
2008-09-18 . chapter 13
I love your fanfiction.
brolly501
2008-09-14 . chapter 13
interesting story looking forward to more
THe KiKO peRsON
2008-09-03 . chapter 13
Update please? You asked what you should name the group, in an earlier AN, and I immediantly thought "X5". X5 is the name of a group of genetically enhanced humans, in a show called "Dark Angel". I was reminded of them a lot in this story.

I'm putting this story on my story alert.
Fanghowl
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
I alway like story similar to xmen-weaponx line and this story is just the right thing. I really love the story. Please write more I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and thank for writing it keep up the good work.

p.s. I really like the map scene. ^^
Fire-Bending-Moose
2008-07-20 . chapter 13
I just started reading this story today and once I started reading I couldn't stop until I ran out of chapters to read at 2 AM. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Please update soon.
KuroAi15
2008-07-20 . chapter 13
GRAR! UPDATE SON!
The Elemental8
2008-06-29 . chapter 12
loved reading the last chapter, when are u makin' a new one

P.s.artimis might be gay u know, after all he did dump a french girl...
The Elemental8
2008-06-29 . chapter 3
it's great, i only just joined a few weeks ago so i havent written much, but i can see yor a genius
sunken ship
2008-06-28 . chapter 12
Love the banter between Artemis and Pietro. Glad the cookie advice helped! Did you make ice cream sandwiches or eat the cookies and ice cream separately? "Disney-worthy, banding together scene" was priceless.

Keep writing!
TrunkZy
2008-06-28 . chapter 12
how come I have missed the past few updates?! I blame those blasted exams. But anywhoo I have caught up and to quote Edward "Praise Ali! Thank you God! Hail Mary! Alhamdulillah! Halelu Yah!".
Thank you. For the incredible FIGHT!scene in chapter 11. I can't say anything constructive because there is a string of incoherent babling "guh" everytime I read that scene. So cool.
AND YOU THREW A MAP AT BUTLER! Can't he take a hint man! Author is trying to help you, dammit.

Fulberg is evil, Dragons will still be cooler than the others(come on!) and I strongly believe Artemis is in the closet (still). Who would dump gorgeous French girl? (actually, that has an eery resemblance to my own life).

"…Pious little bastard." I love that sentence to bits. Actually I really love Pietro/Artemis (in a non slashy type of relationship!).
And Artemis is back in character, which warms my heart so very much ^^ GO PLAN YOU GENIUS!
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