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| Wyborg44 2008-08-23 ch 10,  | abuseNice story... Please update... |
| Silent Reader 2008-08-18 ch 10, anon. | abuseHmm...interesting story here. I really liked it. Though, it would be nice to have more Draco/Seve and Harry/Sev interaction. It is nice to see Albus get deaged, never read that before. It's just like Severus is now Albus big brother. Also, i do noticed Severus looks up to Harry, specially in this chapter when he silently pleaded to Harry to get him out of his spanking. Hope you update soon and that we can see more Draco adn Harry in this story, specially the latest. Also, Remus is still the baby sitter, or as far as i see it you intend it to make him as an 'uncle'. Evidently, Hermoine would be the 'mama', but it is still unclear who would be the 'papa'. at first i thought you intend it to be Harry, but now, well, it makes me kind of understand after the 'i love you' (which was totally sweet, by the way), that Remus is becoming more than an 'uncle' to Sev,since he spends most of his time with Remus than with Draco and Harry. Hope to read more soon. Bye! |
| alimj17 2008-08-10 ch 10, | abuseaw i love them both. i hope you make more chapters soon. i cant wait. |
| Severus13 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abusei absolutly love this one! keep up the good work! |
| eoreos 2008-07-03 ch 10, | abuseGreat story! Please update soon. |
| Snowflake Springs 2008-06-07 ch 10, | abuseI love it! Update soon please:) |
| ShellyD1982 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseOh my Gosh! A baby Dumbledore, what ever next? lol Lets hope Sirius dosn't get turned into a baby when he tries to make the re-aging potion. Baby dumbledore is so cute! especially when he gave severus some of his chocolate frog, most kids would never to that at that age I'm proud of Severus as well, it's a very scary thing to own up to the bad thing U did, well done Severus. I felt bad that he had to have the spanking though but he had to have it great chapter |
| jimmy-barnes-13 2008-05-26 ch 10, | abuseAw this is such a cute story! Awesome stuff, update soon :) |
| nocturnal08 2008-05-24 ch 10, | abuseAw. They're very cute together. |
| Carey Ann Lupin 2008-05-23 ch 10, | abuseI love it! I'm so glad that I'm not at work reading this tale. I wonder who gets de-aged next. Keep it up. Carey Ann Lupin |
| Visitkarte 2008-05-23 ch 10, | abuseWhat was HIS Mione doing holding another child? And a stinky, icky baby at that! LOL! So sweet. And I thin it was a poor repayment for honesty, only saving him the brush. I'd have given him the half of the earned spanks, WITHOUT the brush, of course. It's too much for such a small kid, getting a wooden brush, and too dangerous, too. |
| Hermisia Draco 2008-05-22 ch 10, | abuseAww... how sweet. I loved it. |
| E.Mahiru 2008-05-21 ch 10, | abuseHeh, that was surprisingly cute at the end. I guess I just didn't expect it to be. XD, I love Severus' dislike for babies. I can totally imagine that. |
| boycrazy30008 2008-05-21 ch 10, | abuseThat was cuddley |
| JWOHPfan 2008-05-21 ch 10, | abuseToo cute, little Sevie. I'm sure it won't be long before little Alby gets his own spanking, he's too onery not to. |